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Your Place In My Thoughts

Your place in my thoughts, is like a seed that grows Into a blossom of positivity so bright No-one can capture what my mind knows Or steal the smiles on my face As I keep the hugs, of warm embrace A shine of everlasting light Your place in my thoughts, always flows From morning, through the day, into night With all the compassion your heart shows I always have a garden to see Reaching deep inside of me Gratitude emanating, from this beautiful sight Heidi Sands 5/3/18 Placed 6th in the Rhyme Time 3 Contest. Theme: Your place in my thoughts

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Lyric Man

Date: 5/14/2018 7:56:00 AM

Thoughts of you germinated yesterday. Each poem read was watering those seeds. And now today, this one.. a beautiful bloom!

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/14/2018 8:30:00 AM

That is so nice of you to say! Thank you :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/11/2018 9:22:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Heidi..

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/12/2018 6:35:00 AM

Thank you Joseph :)

Lu Loo

Date: 5/11/2018 12:59:00 PM

sweet lady! great poem all around. I absolutely loved every word! Thank you and congratulations on your placement :) -luloo

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/11/2018 1:31:00 PM

Thank you very much Laura. I appreciate the opportunity to be in your contest and the placement :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/5/2018 6:05:00 PM

Heidi, your beautiful poetic lines flow with graceful rhythm and wonderful rhymes in your loving write; 'No-one can capture what my mind knows Or steal the smiles on my face' - heartfelt and gorgeous. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/5/2018 6:08:00 PM

Oh, thank you so much Susan I appreciate your kind feedback and it makes the day more special :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 5/4/2018 10:02:00 AM

I hope the recipient of your wonderful positivity flourishes. A beautiful poem on this morning, Happy Friday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/4/2018 10:35:00 AM

Thank you Mike! Happy Friday :)

Joseph May

Date: 5/3/2018 5:11:00 PM

"A garden blooming with compassion"... beautiful write Heidi..GL in the contest..

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/3/2018 5:12:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your comment :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/3/2018 5:09:00 PM

Excellent poem Heidi..feels like a love song in beautiful rhymes. Hugs and warmth emanate from your words. Well written!

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/3/2018 5:11:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. I am happy to hear your feedback and appreciate it always :)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/3/2018 4:17:00 PM

This has a strong, loving and spiritual feel to it, Heidi. I love its mellowness and positivity...and the rhyming scheme:) Regards // paul

Heidi Sands
Date: 5/3/2018 4:23:00 PM

Thank you Paul. It is nice to read your feedback on this. I appreciate it very much :)