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Your Place In My Thoughts

Your place in my thoughts, is like a seed that grows
Into a blossom of positivity so bright
No-one can capture what my mind knows
Or steal the smiles on my face
As I keep the hugs, of warm embrace
A shine of everlasting light

Your place in my thoughts, always flows
From morning, through the day, into night
With all the compassion your heart shows
I always have a garden to see
Reaching deep inside of me
Gratitude emanating, from this beautiful sight

Heidi Sands

5/3/18

Placed 6th in the Rhyme Time 3 Contest. 
Theme:  Your place in my thoughts

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Lyric Man Date: 5/14/2018 7:56:00 AM Thoughts of you germinated yesterday. Each poem read was watering those seeds. And now today, this one.. a beautiful bloom! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 5/14/2018 8:30:00 AM That is so nice of you to say! Thank you :)

Joseph May Date: 5/11/2018 9:22:00 PM Congrats on a fine win Heidi.. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 5/12/2018 6:35:00 AM Thank you Joseph :)

Beautiful Scars Date: 5/11/2018 12:59:00 PM sweet lady! great poem all around. I absolutely loved every word! Thank you and congratulations on your placement :) -luloo Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 5/11/2018 1:31:00 PM Thank you very much Laura. I appreciate the opportunity to be in your contest and the placement :)

Susan Ashley Date: 5/5/2018 6:05:00 PM Heidi, your beautiful poetic lines flow with graceful rhythm and wonderful rhymes in your loving write; 'No-one can capture what my mind knows Or steal the smiles on my face' - heartfelt and gorgeous. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 5/5/2018 6:08:00 PM Oh, thank you so much Susan I appreciate your kind feedback and it makes the day more special :)

Mike Gentile Date: 5/4/2018 10:02:00 AM I hope the recipient of your wonderful positivity flourishes. A beautiful poem on this morning, Happy Friday xxoo Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 5/4/2018 10:35:00 AM Thank you Mike! Happy Friday :)

Joseph May Date: 5/3/2018 5:11:00 PM "A garden blooming with compassion"... beautiful write Heidi..GL in the contest.. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 5/3/2018 5:12:00 PM Thank you Joseph. I appreciate your comment :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 5/3/2018 5:09:00 PM Excellent poem Heidi..feels like a love song in beautiful rhymes. Hugs and warmth emanate from your words. Well written! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 5/3/2018 5:11:00 PM Thank you Vijay. I am happy to hear your feedback and appreciate it always :)

Paul Callus Date: 5/3/2018 4:17:00 PM This has a strong, loving and spiritual feel to it, Heidi. I love its mellowness and positivity...and the rhyming scheme:) Regards // paul Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 5/3/2018 4:23:00 PM Thank you Paul. It is nice to read your feedback on this. I appreciate it very much :)