Your Path

Get on my level Join my world Act like a man Not a little girl Do what you must Whatever it takes Stop with excuses It's written on your face Plan to make plans Stop living day by day Be all that you can be Not just what people say Write out your future Make your plan known God is King in him you must grow Trust in him commune everyday Then you'll know How to love me the right way

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Anne Rutherford

Date: 5/24/2012 3:32:00 PM

Wow , this is excellent and very good advice too. Anne

Ms.Erica Jackson

Date: 5/13/2012 2:06:00 AM

niceee . I like when you said "commune everyday"

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 5/12/2012 5:47:00 AM

Well said here Roi!!! Enjoyed reading your poem..interesting write...regards INK-U-SCRIPT

John Rhinem

Date: 5/12/2012 12:07:00 AM

Smile ˜ Life Isn't About Me Myself & I; This Would Be A Red Flags Sign, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Joi * Thus Yesss, Your Beauty Surely Should Be Loved Within The Way That Your Precious Heart Sooo Deserves &, Thank You, For Kind Warm Visit ˜ My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜