Your Path

Get on my level 
Join my world 
Act like a man 
Not a little girl
Do what you must 
Whatever it takes
Stop with excuses
It's written on your face
Plan to make plans
Stop living day by day
Be all that you can be 
Not just what people say
Write out your future
Make your plan known
God is King 
in him you must grow
Trust in him 
commune everyday 
Then you'll know 
How to love me the right way

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Anne Rutherford

Date: 5/24/2012 3:32:00 PM

Wow , this is excellent and very good advice too. Anne

Ms.Erica Jackson

Date: 5/13/2012 2:06:00 AM

niceee . I like when you said "commune everyday"

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 5/12/2012 5:47:00 AM

Well said here Roi!!! Enjoyed reading your poem..interesting write...regards INK-U-SCRIPT

John Rhinem

Date: 5/12/2012 12:07:00 AM

Smile ˜ Life Isn't About Me Myself & I; This Would Be A Red Flags Sign, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Joi * Thus Yesss, Your Beauty Surely Should Be Loved Within The Way That Your Precious Heart Sooo Deserves &, Thank You, For Kind Warm Visit ˜ My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜