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your name in my heart

echocardiogram--- your name in my heart puzzles the doctor ;) © kash poet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/3/2015 1:12:00 AM
Another romantic haiku. SKAT
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Date: 4/21/2012 9:14:00 PM
well, goodnight. I will check soupmails and then get off. It was nice seeing yours were the first comments on my newest poem. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 4/16/2012 7:19:00 AM
ha! I can imagine his look - a wonderfully creative piece! love this! FAV poem
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Date: 4/13/2012 5:59:00 AM
yup, I am here again but this time super early. Couldn't sleep!!
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Date: 4/12/2012 10:27:00 AM
A sweet senryu, Kash. I think we have more flexibility with senryu than with haiku!! Keep up the good work with those Asian forms.
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Date: 4/12/2012 6:46:00 AM
:) Sweet and lovely.. tick tick... tick tick..tickkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk:)tick tick
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Date: 4/11/2012 3:28:00 PM
Well put.
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Date: 4/11/2012 12:11:00 PM
Well said.... - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/11/2012 9:48:00 AM
Oh, here I am again! First place with NO PRIZE, KASH> Aw,,,,come on!...This is an old medical joke that we use to humor patients...It's much better with your poetic flair. Nice nice senryu.. I think it will do fabulous. :) Gwendolen
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