Your Mystic Love

Your mystic love conquered my heart
               Life is beautiful, I never knew  b e f o r e
                    You gave me hope and a desire to live 
          Grievances from past weren't  a n y m o r e.


          Many seasons went by, since you left
               You promised, I waited for your  r e t u r n
                     In loneliness, your memories haunt   
          And my broken heart can't stop to  y e a r n.


          Now my hope is completely shattered   
               All the little pieces of hope are in silent  t e a r s
                    Death alone can save from clutches of pain 
          I have waited enough for all these  y e a r s.





Sept 21, 2016.
All The Little Pieces - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Broken Wings

'Love story' Contest 
Sponsored by: Silent One
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Gauthier Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 9:23 AM
Congratulations on your win, Meenakshi.
One Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 7:31 AM
Beautiful poetry.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest...
Allison Avatar
September 28, 2016 at 1:47 PM
many congrats on your win Meenakshi:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 10:45 AM
Meenakshi, congratulations on your placement in my contest ~
Turner Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 9:25 AM
Very sad write Meenakshi. I'm still waiting to read another of your sonnets:) Good luck in contest!
Scars Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 7:47 AM
sadly beautiful Meenakshi...:)-luloo
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 5:39 AM
deep and sad Meenakshi:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Raha Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 4:11 AM
Heartfelt piece Meenakshi,good luck in the contest.
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