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Whole night you were in my muse Everything erased except your face Today I'm late to rise No one to wake me up When I saw you in far Corner of dry, dark sky My heart gets torn, Eyes can't stop flowing We are missing you "Mom"... He left the world you leave Don't talk, Rough movement and even His smiles erased. Every eve he still waiting for you at the gate The old breezed love Can't take the pain. My small brother asks me When you will come? Your daughter loss All her faith and joy. I can't see their faces It reminds me of you, Your love Babbling Chattering before bed to rig up mosquito-curtain Run after me while going to work! My heart seems to burst And blow up with grief... I miss you at my every step, "Mom" He was empty before you Again fall into nothingness They lost their playmate I lost my best friend! Nobody forbids me, No one says don't do this The call from back to return soon has vanished Sometimes I feel so lonely, My soul intends to cry out Like a simple child And pray to you, "Please come back Mom" If not possible to punish me Make me cry once! Aaborta Dey This poem is based on the death of one of my friend's Mom and I feel more love for my parents when I read this.

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Date: 10/5/2013 1:10:00 PM
This is a very touching and deeply emotional poem. Wonderful work! Congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Date: 10/5/2013 2:43:00 AM
I'm happy having your love and friendship.Welcome to your visit to my wining work.Thank you all........Litan
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Date: 10/2/2013 12:51:00 PM
congrads on your win
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Date: 9/29/2013 11:15:00 AM
Terrific, Litan. Congrats. Ralph
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Date: 9/28/2013 6:10:00 PM
Congrats on your winning.. Litan Dey
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Litan Dey
Date: 10/3/2013 11:52:00 PM
Thank you for your sweet visit
Date: 9/28/2013 2:28:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 9/28/2013 1:52:00 PM
litan,love your winning poem ......... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/28/2013 5:00:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Litan
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Date: 9/27/2013 7:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Litan. Well done, my friend. Licia :-)
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Litan Dey
Date: 10/3/2013 11:55:00 PM
Thanks friend......for nice visit
Date: 9/27/2013 7:34:00 PM
Hello Litan, Congratulations on your "Beloved Poems" win. xox~ LINDA
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Litan Dey
Date: 10/4/2013 12:01:00 AM
Nice to hear you
Date: 9/27/2013 7:32:00 PM
...and congrats on another win with this gem :)
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Date: 9/25/2013 6:24:00 AM
- I looked into the past winners list .. where I found this .... a second place!! - Well deserved!! - CONGRATULATIONS, LITAN !!!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Litan Dey
Date: 10/3/2013 11:58:00 PM
Thanks for well wish granny
Date: 9/25/2013 4:27:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Litan
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Date: 9/24/2013 5:15:00 PM
Litan beautiful epic congrats on win in epic contest Shadow x smile
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Litan Dey
Date: 10/4/2013 12:03:00 AM
Thanks friend....
Date: 9/24/2013 4:51:00 PM
Hello Sweet Litan.......Congrats................. Love~SKAT~
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Litan Dey
Date: 10/3/2013 11:51:00 PM
Thank you skat
Date: 9/24/2013 3:44:00 PM
what a beautiful poem...it touches the reader...I too have lost my mom...congrats on your win
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Date: 10/4/2013 12:05:00 AM
Thanks...have a great day
Date: 9/24/2013 11:32:00 AM
Hi Litan, :)Congratulations!!! Thanks for supporting my EPIC contest with this amazing deep imagery. Exactly what I was looking for. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""In The Stars"" OR my latest blog! " Wartime Memories " at -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15948&PoetID=18720 always & forever **LINDA
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Date: 9/24/2013 7:54:00 AM
Hello Litan, a very deep poem.. wow.. the ending is intense. thanks for sharing your emotions in such a heartfelt poem...XOX...linda
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Litan Dey
Date: 10/3/2013 11:56:00 PM
Nice to hear from you.....
Date: 9/22/2013 9:00:00 PM
how sad this is and very heartfelt and sincere.
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Litan Dey
Date: 9/24/2013 7:25:00 AM
Thanks dear
Date: 9/16/2013 1:39:00 AM
A very deep write full of longing and pain...Thank you for sharing this glimpse into your heart....
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Litan Dey
Date: 9/16/2013 2:19:00 AM
Welcome to my work and thanks for your visit

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