Your Melodious Memories

Whole night you were in my muse
Everything erased except your face
Today I'm late to rise
No one to wake me up
When I saw you in far
Corner of dry, dark sky
My heart gets torn,
Eyes can't stop flowing
We are missing you "Mom"...

He left the world you leave
Don't talk,
Rough movement and even
His smiles erased.
Every eve he still waiting for you at the gate
The old breezed love
Can't take the pain.

My small brother asks me
When you will come?
Your daughter loss
All her faith and joy.

I can't see their faces
It reminds me of you,
Your love
Babbling
Chattering before bed to rig up mosquito-curtain
Run after me while going to work!
My heart seems to burst
And blow up with grief...
I miss you at my every step, "Mom"

He was empty before you
Again fall into nothingness
They lost their playmate
I lost my best friend!

Nobody forbids me,
No one says don't do this
The call from back to return soon has vanished
Sometimes I feel so lonely,
My soul intends to cry out
Like a simple child
And pray to you, "Please come back Mom"
If not possible to punish me
Make me cry once!

Aaborta Dey
This poem is based on the death of one of my friend's Mom and I feel more love for my parents when I read this.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Deschler Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 1:10 PM
This is a very touching and deeply emotional poem. Wonderful work! Congratulations on your well deserved win!
Dey Avatar
October 5, 2013 at 2:43 AM
I'm happy having your love and friendship.Welcome to your visit to my wining work.Thank you all........Litan
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October 2, 2013 at 12:51 PM
congrads on your win
Taylor Avatar
September 29, 2013 at 11:15 AM
Terrific, Litan. Congrats. Ralph
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September 28, 2013 at 6:10 PM
Congrats on your winning.. Litan Dey
Dey Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 11:52 PM
Thank you for your sweet visit
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 2:28 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
A  Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 1:52 PM
litan,love your winning poem ......... LOVE ~SKAT~
Mehta Avatar
September 28, 2013 at 5:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Litan
Hendricks Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 7:55 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Litan. Well done, my friend. Licia :-)
Dey Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 11:55 PM
Thanks friend......for nice visit
A   Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 7:34 PM
Hello Litan, Congratulations on your "Beloved Poems" win. xox~ LINDA
Dey Avatar
October 4, 2013 at 12:01 AM
Nice to hear you
Adams Avatar
September 27, 2013 at 7:32 PM
...and congrats on another win with this gem :)
Andresen Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 6:24 AM
- I looked into the past winners list .. where I found this .... a second place!! - Well deserved!! - CONGRATULATIONS, LITAN !!!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Dey Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 11:58 PM
Thanks for well wish granny
Mehta Avatar
September 25, 2013 at 4:27 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, Litan
Hamilton Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 5:15 PM
Litan beautiful epic congrats on win in epic contest Shadow x smile
Dey Avatar
October 4, 2013 at 12:03 AM
Thanks friend....
A  Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 4:51 PM
Hello Sweet Litan.......Congrats................. Love~SKAT~
Dey Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 11:51 PM
Thank you skat
Adams Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 3:44 PM
what a beautiful poem...it touches the reader...I too have lost my mom...congrats on your win
Dey Avatar
October 4, 2013 at 12:05 AM
Thanks...have a great day
A   Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 11:32 AM
Hi Litan, :)Congratulations!!! Thanks for supporting my EPIC contest with this amazing deep imagery. Exactly what I was looking for. If you'd like:-) stop by my latest poem ""In The Stars"" OR my latest blog! " Wartime Memories " at -----> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15948&PoetID=18720 always & forever **LINDA
A   Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 7:54 AM
Hello Litan, a very deep poem.. wow.. the ending is intense. thanks for sharing your emotions in such a heartfelt poem...XOX...linda
Dey Avatar
October 3, 2013 at 11:56 PM
Nice to hear from you.....
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 9:00 PM
how sad this is and very heartfelt and sincere.
Dey Avatar
September 24, 2013 at 7:25 AM
Thanks dear
Manassian Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 1:39 AM
A very deep write full of longing and pain...Thank you for sharing this glimpse into your heart....
Dey Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 2:19 AM
Welcome to my work and thanks for your visit
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