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Your Magical Smile

You are wearing your happiness today And sunshine glimmers wherever you go Your bright liquid smile takes me far away Deeper and deeper these sweet waters flow I am drowning in every word you say Yet sunshine beckons the deeper I go To bask in your presence each night, each day As your tender current draws me under We are not drowning but diving you say Into this bliss of sweetest surrender Into the death of an ignorant past As those gentle currents draw us under We surrender our selves to love at last Reborn now in the light of a new day Rising in the wake of all that is past Thankful that fate somehow threw me your way To be part of your happiness today Magical how your smile takes me away To a fairy tale land far, far away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/12/2013 9:17:00 AM
This poem was so easy-going and flowed extremely well. Usually with terzanelles, they can feel a bit choppy at times. But with this I didn't even notice the repeating lines. VERY nicely done!
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Date: 4/22/2013 4:53:00 PM
Beautiful. Thanks for the lovely journey!
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Date: 4/2/2013 12:42:00 PM
What a sweet love poem......Donna
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Michael Dom
Date: 4/6/2013 1:37:00 AM
we all know the feeling. cheers!

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