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Your Lying Eyes

As get up and on my way Strolling towards the pier On this fine sun shining day Looking for someplace cool Where I can drink a beer I noticed a lady sitting very near She gradually peered up to see me Oh what a mystery as her Lying eyes surrounded The spirit that lives in me As if she had control of those Deep dark lying eyes that now Controlled the vessel that guides what I see At this point, I'm starting To despise what this lady has done With her lying eyes before I could realize I was sitting down when she said now Open your eyes, and don't try to be wise Or I will let these lying eyes Take you on this wild crazy ride Way up be honed the sky When you ask yourself why Then you should have never looked At me because of my lying eyes Has captured you as my prize Unfortunately, this has Led to your demise Nobody dares try to look Into my lying eyes And ever lives To tell a lie

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/7/2018 9:35:00 AM
Interestingly enough, this too is a fine poem; it takes such a dark bend; I am going to re-read it. It is proof that you have more than one trick up your sleeve, Jack.
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Jack Cooper
Date: 5/7/2018 11:05:00 AM
Thanks, Caren I rarely write fiction just wanted to see if my imagination had the ability to do it so thanks for reading it and enjoying it.

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