Besma Riabi Dziri Poet Free verse

Your Love Wouldn'T Cease To Rain

Mother
The best of all my words 
I love calling you

Past were those so many years 
when the petals of my heart would  blossom
as your voice, the sweetest of music would flow
the youth of my soul would cease to grow.

Gone were those so sweet times
when you, mother, in my world would reign
as your Love wouldn’t cease to rain
and the thirst of my soul wouldn’t remain.

Mother
The finest of all my words 
I love calling you

I once confided into my words a promise
I would conceal your warmth in my very abyss
I would ever keep your candlelight aglow
and have my bereaved heart lay down its woe
the grief of my soul, I’ll keep my word
and into oblivion, I’ll try to throw.

In vain, I tell you mother
the pain of your loss in my heart couldn’t wane
my words on your blessings are overflowing and plain
the bond we shared is running in my vein
the love I had from you, burning to regain.

Mother
The sweetest of all my words 
I love calling you.

May 26th,  2019

Happy Mother’s Day  to all the precious mothers in the world
Celebrated on the last Sunday of  May, in Tunisia

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Richard Lamoureux August 24, 2019 at 7:57 AM What a lovely and poetically expressed ode to your mom. Your words danced within my mind’s eye. Blessings Rick. Besma Riabi Dziri August 25, 2019 at 11:34 AM I'm so delighted, Richard! Thank you so much for your so amazing a praise to my humble poetry.. It means a lot to me.. my honour and pleasure. Best regards and blessings.

Darlene De Beaulieu June 6, 2019 at 6:11 PM Hello Besma Riama, you have created a beautiful Mother's Day poem. I have enjoyed to read. have a nice evening my friend. Besma Riabi Dziri June 12, 2019 at 5:32 PM I'm very glad you enjoyed my humble work. Thank you so much, Darlene, for your kind feedback and praise. God bless you.

Arturo Michael June 4, 2019 at 9:02 AM " mother" without her there'll be no life...it's a powerful word...Congratulations Besma...A wonderful write... Besma Riabi Dziri June 12, 2019 at 5:30 PM Absolutely, "mother" is the root.. the bond.. beyond words! Thank you so much, Arturo, for your graceful visit and sincere feedback. My deepest regards and blessings.

Swetha Vangaveti June 3, 2019 at 11:26 PM A poignant write and a great tribute to mother. :) Besma Riabi Dziri June 12, 2019 at 5:26 PM My pleasure, Swetha! Thank you so much for your visit and lovely feedback. Best regards and blessings

Gregory Richard Barden June 1, 2019 at 8:55 PM What a gorgeous and poignant write, and a subject so dear to my heart ... my mother has always been my best friend, and I would literally have been lost without her. Thank you for sharing this touching gem ... excellent work, my friend! :-) <3 Besma Riabi Dziri June 12, 2019 at 5:25 PM Thank you so much, Gregory, for such a generous and a beautiful comment! Indeed, precious are mums.. very dear is whatever it is related to her.. a most beautiful soul in our lives.. deeply humbled and grateful for your graceful presence and kindness. God bless you.

Charles Messina May 30, 2019 at 7:05 AM Happy belated POTD Besma, and also Happy belated Mother's Day. Fantastic write...Congratulations.~Charlie Besma Riabi Dziri May 30, 2019 at 7:59 AM You are always welcome, Charles.. honoured and very delighted to see you on my page.. thank you so much for your warm wishes and sincere appreciation.. my deepest regards and blessings.

Connie Marcum Wong May 28, 2019 at 11:25 PM Besma. This is such a beautiful tribute to your departed mother and to all mothers on your Mother's Day. Congratulations on having it honored for POTD! I loved it! : ) blessings, Connie xxoo Besma Riabi Dziri May 29, 2019 at 6:57 AM My honour and pleasure, dear Connie.. I'm very glad you liked and enjoyed my humble work.. your warm feedback is my reward.. thank you so much.. warmest wishes and blessings.. Love and hugs.

Carole Duet May 28, 2019 at 9:41 PM Hi Besma! What a sweet poem for a dear mother. I'm sure she would be so pleased and proud of you. I know the pain of losing a mother you've been very close to and I know it is hard but I bet she's an angel now and probably guarding your every step. Congratulations on POTD dear poet. Besma Riabi Dziri May 29, 2019 at 6:48 AM Thank you so much, Carole, for your kind and soothing words.. indeed, departed dear souls are our guardian angels.. May God bless you always.. warmest wishes and regards.

Susan Ashley May 28, 2019 at 8:33 PM Dearest Besma, how deeply you move my being with your tender plea calling out to your beloved Mother. I adore the refrains which change slightly with each repetition. The poignancy builds in your soulful poem in such a beautiful way. How sweet is the love experienced between a devoted mother and daughter.. and that sweet love and its heartache felt when your Mother is gone never wanes, how can it when 'the bond we shared is running in my vein / the love I had from you, burning to regain.' Your brilliant and impassioned poem, so pure with wistful emotion, brings tears to your ardent reader's eyes. Congratulations with your well-deserved recognition with POTD honors, my dear soul sister. Warmest wishes, love and hugs.. ~Susan Besma Riabi Dziri May 29, 2019 at 6:39 AM The yearning in my heart.. the longing in my soul.. ever increasing and kindled.. every sweet calling of the word "mother" .. every memory.. awaken my deep love.. stir my dormant woe.. and here I am resorting to my closest world.. my passion for words.. to breathe out my most sincere sentiments to a most beautiful loveable and loving soul in my life, mother.. I wanted to share what I feel with ardent readers of a high level of sensitivity and beauty.. you are, dearest Susan, my avid reader I look up to for your passionate heart.. your sharp mind.. your poetic soul.. I do read up to you, climbing the ladder of humanity, quality, depth and beauty.. Having a soul sister, a poetess who feels every single pulse of my feelings.. who resonates with every humble word I breathe.. whose heart before eyes respond to pain and glee.. I am the one blessed! I would like to thank you my dear Susan for being on my path of poetry and a beauty in my heart.. Besma Riabi Dziri May 29, 2019 at 6:39 AM thank you so much for all the genuine and heartfelt words on both my humble soul and poetry.. always a great delight to see you on my page. Warmest wishes.. my love and hugs.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2019 at 2:02 PM - Ahhh ... a beautiful poem, Besma - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Besma Riabi Dziri May 29, 2019 at 4:03 AM More beautiful is your comment honouring my humble work, dear Anne-Lise ! Thank you so much for being here.. my warmest wishes. Love and hugs.

Brandy Nicole May 28, 2019 at 1:46 PM Dear Besma, when a mother gives birth, she knows she is holding someone she will love- for always. Precious is that name. "Mother" You have touched my heart deeply with this dedication to Mother's everywhere. This is so beautiful and tender. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy Besma Riabi Dziri May 29, 2019 at 3:57 AM Dear Brandy, how nice to see you! How blissful to read your warm and deep poetic words! I'm deeply humbled that my humble words reach out to your poetic and perceptive heart.. you honour and reward my humble poetry by your graceful and beautiful presence.. thank you so much.. warmest wishes and love.

Silent One May 28, 2019 at 1:01 PM I'm not surprised this brilliant poem got POTD. Congratulations. Besma Riabi Dziri May 29, 2019 at 3:50 AM Much beauty flowing into my very soul today! Blessed and grateful.. thank you so much, Silent One, for your presence, support and encouragement.. always an immense pleasure to read your uplifting feedbacks.. warmest wishes and regards. God bless you.

Jennifer Proxenos May 28, 2019 at 12:56 PM Dearest Besma - What a truly deserved honour has been bestowed upon you my dear soul sister - a poem for a mother that meant everything and the world to you and whose blood will run in your veins and remain there forever. Congratulations, love and blessings dear Besma. A wonderful message to all mothers on mother's day. Jennifer. Besma Riabi Dziri May 29, 2019 at 3:44 AM You shine on my page, soul sister.. you spread your love and kindness and fill my very heart with great delight and beauty.. thank you so much, dearest Jenny for being here to share my glee and blessing.. deeply touched and humbled.. my love and hugs.

Sunlite Wanter May 28, 2019 at 10:32 AM Beautiful and heartfelt, Besma. Maybe somehow your mother knows of your honor and its inspiration to others. Congratulations. Besma Riabi Dziri May 29, 2019 at 3:35 AM Thank you so much for your sweet and soothing words, dear Sunlite! Rewarding is your feedback! My honour and pleasure.. warmest wishes and regards.

Robertina B. May 28, 2019 at 7:55 AM Such a glorious poem , Besma.. Congratulations on your POTD!! I Feel moved !! Your beautiful write touched me.. So heartfelt! I have such wonderful memories of my Sweet Mom.. She unfortunately is suffering from Alzheimer Disease.. It breaks my heart .. Have a blessed day, Besma.. Besma Riabi Dziri May 29, 2019 at 3:32 AM So hard and painful to have a beloved and precious soul unable to recognise you.. a dear soul who loses touch with life and unable to reach you! I do feel your pain, dear Robertina.. May her physical presence and sweet memories be a solace for you.. thank you so for genuineness and kindness.. warmest wishes. God bless you.

Winged Warrior May 28, 2019 at 7:30 AM Happy momma's day, dear Besma...and Congrats!!! on POTD!! my friend...a lovely and profound verse...happy endings...and happy to see you here...^WW^...{*J*} Besma Riabi Dziri May 29, 2019 at 3:22 AM Thank you so much, Winged Warrior, for your warm wishes and congratulations.. an immense delight to read your kind and appreciative words.. You do honour my humble poetry by your graceful presence on my page.. my deepest regards.

Vijay Pandit May 28, 2019 at 7:29 AM Back again to cheer ..so glad to see this as poem of the day. So well deserved, Besma. Besma Riabi Dziri May 28, 2019 at 6:16 PM Always a great delight to see you on my page, dear Vijay.. of the beautiful souls and captivating poetry I look up to and aspire.. thank you so much for your generosity and genuineness.. my deepest regards. Stay blessed always.

Kai Michael Neumann May 28, 2019 at 6:41 AM This is most beautiful. My own and now late mother's birthday was four years ago and I cherish your tribute. Besma Riabi Dziri May 28, 2019 at 6:12 PM Glad to have my humble words resonate with you, Kai.. May God protect and bless your precious mother.. thank you so much for being here, you honour my humble poetry.. Best regards.

Robert Lindley May 28, 2019 at 5:52 AM This my great friend, is a truly deep and most sincere expression of love from a child to cherished and most beloved mother! Adding this great heartfelt gem to my fav list and giving you my sincere thanks for gifting it to us to be blessed to read.God bless... Besma Riabi Dziri May 28, 2019 at 6:09 PM Such a wonderful feedback is the best of rewards and recognition.. such kind and appreciative words add a lot to my humble poetry.. thank you so much, Robert for your uplifting support.. my deepest regards. God bless you.

Maria Williams May 28, 2019 at 5:15 AM Back again with my congratulations my sweet dear friend on your beautiful tribute being honored with POTD, so well deserved....Maria xox Besma Riabi Dziri May 28, 2019 at 6:01 PM You honour me dearest Maria.. so much love and beauty today! Blessed and grateful.. thank you heaps.. love and hugs.

Tania Kitchin May 28, 2019 at 4:39 AM Beautifully written, congratulations on POTD! Besma Riabi Dziri May 28, 2019 at 4:49 PM My pleasure, Tania.. thank you so much for honouring my humble work.. Regards

Tom Cunningham May 28, 2019 at 4:17 AM Beautiful tribute Besma, congratulations on POTD. Greetings from Kefalonia. Tom Besma Riabi Dziri May 28, 2019 at 5:01 AM Immensely delighted to receive such thrilling news! Tom, so kind and generous of you.. You do bring great joy and genuine care here on PS! I am tremendously grateful to you for your graceful presence to honour my humble poem.. along with all my fellow poets and friends who spread love and pour an immense flow of beauty into my soul.. Have a great time on the island! Warmest wishes and regards.

Ralph Sergi May 27, 2019 at 6:08 PM Hello, Besma: My mother came from Italy many years ago and in her wisdom taught me how to be humble when it really counted and to be steadfast as well. Your poem epitomizes her! Besma Riabi Dziri May 28, 2019 at 6:01 AM We are the seeds of precious and beautiful souls.. Our parents build a huge part of our core.. we are ever grateful to them for the beauty they add to us.. May God protect your precious mum, Ralph.. thank you so much for your graceful presence and deep words. My deepest regards and blessings.

Freddie Robinson Jr. May 27, 2019 at 7:28 AM Amen, sister Besma! I feel your joy and pain for the womb love of our life. You mesmerize and tantalize w/your graceful poetic style. Fabulous poem! Love and peace always. Besma Riabi Dziri May 28, 2019 at 5:55 AM Words of beauty on my humble poem! Deeply humbled and honoured by your generous and appreciative comment.. thank you so much, Freddie. My deepest regards. God bless you.

Maria Williams May 27, 2019 at 6:56 AM When it comes to describing a love for one's Mother, the most important person in our lives, words are never adequate enough. Though Besma your beautiful words depict 'All and More'. Of all the types of love, a mother’s is the strongest. The love between mother and child arises instantly, as a bond uniting two bodies and souls. A mother’s love is unconditional and eternal.Brilliant flowing poetry as always my sweet friend. You are indeed your mothers daughter. Her beauty shines forever in you. A fave for me this lovely tribute....Maria Hugs Besma Riabi Dziri May 28, 2019 at 5:49 AM Mother daughter bond the strongest.. sweetest.. most genuine and generous of bonds! To be lived.. felt.. and ever cherished.. Dearest Maria, a great mum in heart and soul.. I wish you the best of life and moments with your sweethearts and angels.. Happy Mother's Day! Always a great pleasure to read your fine and insightful words.. words filled with Life and Love.. always grateful, Love and hugs.

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