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Your Love Is Like a Gentle Breeze

Your love is like a gentle breeze
it sweeps away my pain
you fill my heart with sunshine
and dry up all my rain.

Your love is like a gentle breeze
caressing me so tender
with the love you give to me
it is my heart you render.

Your love is like a gentle breeze
warm and soft and sweet
with your love you fill my heart
until it is replete.



Happy Valentines Day!

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Lawrence Ingle

February 24, 2009 at 8:24 PM

Who's the fortunate man...did you give him this..for a valentine kiss... It's so beautiful..I'm gettin' jealous..lol..By golly..I like all kinds of music too..I just can't stand that boomp! boomp! stuff, when it's so loud that it vibrates my windows, and it has hateful words to it. The military school wasn't too bad, I was getting out of hand at the time. The worst part of it was the fighting. Once they knew you weren't their punk, it was cool. Lot's of bootie bandits, queers I say. L. in Lou.

Arany P.

February 21, 2009 at 4:47 AM

a write so well written for any day of love... wonderful choice of words... loved the peace this write allowed!! ~ Arany

Amy Swanson

February 17, 2009 at 11:34 AM

Robin this is so lovely... just perfect for Valentine's Day or anytime that love is in the air! :) I love how you repeated the title throughout, at the beginning of each stanza - it gave such a flowing rhythm, almost lilting, and the words were beautiful. This would make a wonderful song, actually, really lyrical. Thanks :) so much for the kind comments on my poetry and hope you had a wonderful valentine's day! :) Love, Amy

Belinda Parish

February 14, 2009 at 10:55 PM

A sweet write for Valentine's day...

Carolyn Devonshire

February 14, 2009 at 8:52 PM

Robin, love always finds a way to "sweep away my pain." Such a lovely read for Valentine's Day! Carolyn

February 14, 2009 at 4:56 PM

Happy Valentine's Day to you too. Nice view on love to celebrate the day. I like your relationship between love and a gentle breeze. Keep on writing. Thank you for your ongoing support. Karen

Raul Moreno

February 14, 2009 at 2:37 PM

This is a lovely poem Robin, I like the title, it's fitting. Happy Valentine's Day...Raul

Laura Mckenzie

February 14, 2009 at 10:53 AM

Robin a very lovely touching poem great for Valentines day! Laura :)

John Rhinem

February 14, 2009 at 9:06 AM

....that it would be "You," that brought sunshine to anothers more than blessed, "Heart!!!"~Smile~Again, the gentleness inside of You "Beautiful Robin," says to another, that "You" are the subject of this poem, unto they themselves!!!"~"My Love To You Always, John!!!":) On we go....

John Rhinem

February 14, 2009 at 9:00 AM

...."you fill my heart with sunshine, and dry up all my rain"~Smile~what a wonderful thought,~ to be so fortunate as to bring such "A Beautiful Heart," (Yours) a happiness such as this~for I could only imagine, that it would be the other way around....cont....

John Rhinem

February 14, 2009 at 8:54 AM

Smile~"This Is So Soft & Beautiful!!!"~"Good Morning Precious & Priceless & Beautiful Robin!!!"~"Happy Valetines Day To You Dear!!!"~Whenever I read tender and lovely words, it is like looking over the most peaceful landscape, and simply lost amid the most serene daydream!!!....cont....