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Your Love I'll Ever Bear


I want to word my very Love for you
though as a shy child, I start to stammer
a beloved Mother, my sole bijou
as I am of your prime Land enamoured.

A rose breathing the scent of your terra
born and bred knowing no other home soil
how can I bear the burn of your Summer
anger and worry within my chest boil.

I want to paint my very pride in you
with drops of my blood and ivory star
then draw your nature and beauty anew
how would my poetry meet who you are?

To my dear mother, shall I, You compare?
TUNISIA, Your Love, I'll ever bear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 8/18/2019 5:27:00 PM
So beautiful and poetic, this great love of yours. I was going to pick a stanza. But could not. They are ALL PERFECT in Love's expression and the smooth inspirational read of it. Very very much enjoyed. Besma "the beautiful"
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Date: 8/20/2019 4:45:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jude, for so wonderful a feedback! I'm deeply humbled.. my honour and pleasure.. Blessings.
Date: 7/14/2019 4:13:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to your country. The sonnet rhymes and flows very well..
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Date: 7/18/2019 11:45:00 AM
I'm very glad you liked and praised my poem, Silent One! I do highly appreciate your presence and support.. thank you so much.. Blessings.
Date: 7/10/2019 2:38:00 PM
A patriotic beautiful, soulful write dear Besma, your love, your Tunisia, your land, your country - a proud tribute to both your mother and her mother country - I have made this a fav and will return to it as I do to most of your poems. My dear friend, blessings, love and hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/12/2019 4:36:00 AM
Sweet friend Jenny, thank you so much for your so wonderful a feedback! Your presence here on my page means a lot to me.. kindness, generosity, beauty and support are what uplift my soul and cheer my heart.. Soul sister, always a great pleasure seeing you! My warmest wishes. Love and hugs.
Date: 7/10/2019 5:33:00 AM
I've never been to Tunisia, my loss really as it is so near Malta. Now I am too old to travel not to mention that I am alone now. Your poem is a eulogy to you mother country with which you are so in love and rightly so. Your patriotism shines as does your poetry, a beautiful sonnet too. God bless you. Regards with a fave. Victor
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Date: 7/12/2019 4:30:00 AM
Life offers what it is meant to.. I think we are always blessed to be able to achieve what is in our bucket list.. Blessed you are with your great gift! Blessed you are as you breathe in the company of an amazing pen! Blessed you are with so many beautiful souls, fellow poets and friends here on PS.. Thank you so much, Victor for your generosity.. being here to highly appreciate my humble work.. so honoured and delighted.. My deepest regards. God bless you.
Date: 7/5/2019 12:52:00 PM
My dearest Besma, the emotions for your beloved Mother and her beloved motherland were inextricably woven in life as they are now in the beautiful tribute of your splendid Sonnet of passion. How could you not love and honor both? I especially love 'a beloved Mother, my sole bijou' - how precious this imagery is that shines to the depths of your heart.. you express a profound sense of love, of devotion and of respect, and through challenges your dedication to your exalted Mother helps you to carry on. I truly admire the rich emotional facets of your poem composed in the brilliant ink of your golden pen and your shining soul. A gem for your ardent reader and a fav! My appreciation for you is ever present, my inspiring soul sister. Warmest wishes, love and hugs always.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/10/2019 5:38:00 PM
Dear Susan, thank you so much from the depth of my heart for your warmth, kindness, generosity and beauty.. my warmest wishes.. Love and hugs.
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Date: 7/10/2019 5:36:00 PM
Always a great honour and a tremendous pleasure receiving such an exquisite comment, dearest Susan.. I'm deeply thrilled my poem doesn't fail to reach so sensitive a heart.. and so beautiful a mind.. I'm deeply blissful I could touch a generous soul and a beautiful mind.. dear soul sister, my words wouldn't find the finest expressions to thank you and give you due respect and admiration..
Date: 7/5/2019 10:02:00 AM
What a grand dedication.
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Date: 7/10/2019 5:05:00 PM
Thank you so much , Richard, for your honourable visit and rewarding feedback.. my deepest regards and blessings.
Date: 7/4/2019 4:32:00 PM
The depth, beauty, width and scope of this fine piece awes me. A great and true poet's heart you most assuredly possess my friend, and a very, very fine one at that !.. A fantastic sonnet, a fav too..
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Date: 7/10/2019 5:04:00 PM
I so much appreciate your valuable words on my humble poem! Your praising words mean a lot to me.. deeply humbled and pleased.. thank you so much, Robert for your great support and sincere encouragement.. my deepest regards. Blessings.
Date: 7/4/2019 3:24:00 PM
stunning write about one's devotion for a motherland...this is incredible compared to my recent work on love, besma... huggs
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Date: 7/10/2019 5:00:00 PM
The honour is mine dear Nette! You outshine with your so wonderful poetry! Thank you so much for being here to read and support my humble work.. Love and hugs.
Date: 7/4/2019 3:05:00 AM
Besma, I open my eyes wider to your verse, again, and again without end. -Richard
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Date: 7/10/2019 4:57:00 PM
You do honour me and my humble poetry with such an amazing feedback! Thank you so much, Richard for your graceful presence and kindness. Blessings.
Date: 7/2/2019 7:06:00 AM
Besma my dear sweet friend, your sonnet of affirmation to your Mother and the analogy to your home land is nothing short of being beautifully, profound and expressed with feeling. I salute you - It has to go into my fave list. Thank you for sharing your innermost thoughts and joys. Maria Hugs and Joy
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Date: 7/3/2019 7:33:00 AM
An immense pleasure, dearest Maria to read your kind and sincere words on my humble work and soul.. blessed I am by such a beautiful bond.. grateful I am to you for your uplifting support and generous encouragement.. thank you so much dear friend for the warmth and glee you spread into my heart.. my most sincere love and hugs.
Date: 7/2/2019 12:25:00 AM
You have expressed such a beautiful part of yourself in this lovely poem Besma. I will be faving this gorgeous poem too my friend. xxoo : )
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Date: 7/3/2019 7:25:00 AM
Indeed, our words echo a great part of us.. thank you so much, dear Connie, for your sweet presence and generous feedback.. My great pleasure! Love and hugs.
Date: 7/1/2019 4:56:00 PM
beautiful verse, Besma, just stunning.
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Date: 7/1/2019 6:19:00 PM
A great pleasure seeing you here on my page dear Eve! Thank you so much for such a beautiful feedback! So much appreciated.. warmest regards and blessings.
Date: 6/30/2019 7:07:00 AM
WOW! This is an awesome write..every word stems from the heart and captures the reader..in its unique phrasing such as:I want to word my very Love for you and its beauty like:A rose breathing the scent of your terra. Much enjoyed, Besma..adding to my FAV.
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Date: 6/30/2019 7:17:00 AM
My words wouldn't meet your humility and generosity.. I'm deeply grateful to you, dear Vijay, for your graceful presence and continuous support and sincere encouragement.. my humble poetry could attain beauty only with such a beautiful and genuine feedback! Once again, thank you heaps from the depth of my heart.. my deepest regards.. God bless you.