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you softly whisper my name, candlelight glows in your eyes, promises dance in your smile; your love enfolds me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/24/2011 1:36:00 PM
Hello Deb, Congratulations on your win, its lovely hon, well done. As Always, Shar
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Date: 1/23/2011 4:20:00 PM
Deb~A late Congratulation~ on your win in Michael's hot contest,..p.d.
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Date: 1/23/2011 8:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Spicy" contest Deb sponsored by Michael. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/23/2011 6:38:00 AM
a sweet one, a real hallmark moment congrad's on this fine win. Light & Love
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Date: 1/22/2011 7:20:00 PM
Your win! Congratulations.
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Date: 1/22/2011 3:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 1/22/2011 1:31:00 PM
simply beautiful. And I love it still. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/22/2011 9:45:00 AM
precious write! CHEERS for the win, dear deb! :) hugggs, nette
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Date: 1/22/2011 9:37:00 AM
Deb congratulations on your great win in MF's contest ;-)
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Date: 1/22/2011 6:16:00 AM
Congrats Deb on your super win in the Spicy for ladies only contest with this wonderful write and win my friend..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 1/22/2011 6:10:00 AM
Congrats to you my dear!!! luv Michael
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Date: 1/22/2011 6:07:00 AM
Hi Deb - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "SPICY" contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/9/2011 5:37:00 PM
Thank you, Mr. Pettit!!
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Date: 1/9/2011 4:58:00 PM
Deb, watch your syllable count in the second and third lines. You have eight syllables in both (one too many). Just replace each "within" with "in" and you are under the wire.
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Date: 1/9/2011 3:42:00 PM
just lovely Deb..very romantic with "promise dances,candlelight glows"...love,Deb
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Date: 1/9/2011 3:17:00 PM
Romantic as can be!!
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Date: 1/9/2011 2:37:00 PM
an inviting love with such beauty:), enjoyed your write,..p.d.
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