Your Love

you softly whisper my name,
candlelight glows in your eyes,
promises dance in your smile;
your love enfolds me

lovedodoitsu

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Sharon Ruebel

January 24, 2011 at 1:36 PM

Hello Deb, Congratulations on your win, its lovely hon, well done. As Always, Shar

Poet Destroyer A

January 23, 2011 at 4:20 PM

Deb~A late Congratulation~ on your win in Michael's hot contest,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 23, 2011 at 8:28 AM

Congratulations on your win in the "Spicy" contest Deb sponsored by Michael. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

January 23, 2011 at 6:38 AM

a sweet one, a real hallmark moment congrad's on this fine win. Light & Love

Robert Pettit

January 22, 2011 at 7:20 PM

Your win! Congratulations.

Sara Kendrick

January 22, 2011 at 3:08 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

January 22, 2011 at 1:31 PM

simply beautiful. And I love it still. Congratulations!

Nette Onclaud

January 22, 2011 at 9:45 AM

precious write! CHEERS for the win, dear deb! :) hugggs, nette

Wilma Neels

January 22, 2011 at 9:37 AM

Deb congratulations on your great win in MF's contest ;-)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 22, 2011 at 6:16 AM

Congrats Deb on your super win in the Spicy for ladies only contest with this wonderful write and win my friend..enjoy with luv..

Michael J. Falotico

January 22, 2011 at 6:10 AM

Congrats to you my dear!!! luv Michael

Kory Calhoun

January 22, 2011 at 6:07 AM

Hi Deb - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "SPICY" contest. Best wishes, KC

Deb Radke

January 9, 2011 at 5:37 PM

Thank you, Mr. Pettit!!

Robert Pettit

January 9, 2011 at 4:58 PM

Deb, watch your syllable count in the second and third lines. You have eight syllables in both (one too many). Just replace each "within" with "in" and you are under the wire.