Gurpreet Kaur Poet Blank verse

Your Love

When you came into my life, 
Came like a gentle breeze, 
Touched my soul, 
With melodious rhymes, 
Filled my heart with your love, 
We were not two, 
We were one, 
Just blended into each other,
You filled my life, 
With magical romance, 
I was on the peak of world, 
With wings of your love, 
I was running on clouds, 
Touching the moon and stars, 
Everything was so seraphic. 

But, when you left, 
It was like a hurricane, 
You were strong and horrid, 
Cracked my heart into pieces, 
I became alone, 
Trapped in emotional storm, 
You filled my life, 
With doleful howls, 
I fell in the world of satan, 
You broke my wings, 
And make me die with hellish doom, 
You took my peace of heart, 
And left me alone, 
In the chasm of ignominy, 
Everything is so demonic.

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Ann Foster July 8, 2019 at 8:35 PM I have been to visit both sides of this world you speak of... Yes, written very well indeed. Ann Gurpreet Kaur July 8, 2019 at 10:45 PM Thank you so much for your appreciation ????

Caren Krutsinger June 26, 2019 at 8:15 PM "But, when you left, It was like a hurricane, You were strong and horrid, Cracked my heart into pieces, I became alone, Trapped in emotional storm," This came on so quickly, but sounds like how I imagine it would feel. Thank you for sharing, and welcome to Poetry Soup, Gurpreet. Gurpreet Kaur June 26, 2019 at 10:07 PM Thnku dear ???