Your Looks

Your punishing look;
With such venom in your eyes,
Casts dispersions upon my character;
As if my entirety you despise.
Though my error was one of innocence,
Under a rock I wish to crawl.
Your punishing look;
Can no pleasantries you recall?

Your questioning look;
Causes me too, to doubt myself;
Perhaps indeed my motives were flawed;
Maybe I need some psychological help.
Why do I do the things I do?
I hate disappointing you so.
Your questioning look;
Just what is it you want to know?

Your forgiving look;
Softens the hurt I feel inside,
I have prayed for your forgiveness;
I didn’t mean to make you cry.
I know I’ve learned a lesson
That I’ll remember through the years.
Your forgiving look;
Does it help keep back the tears?

Your understanding look;
No one else knows me like you do;
You know that I’m not perfect,
But mistakes don’t mean I don’t love you.
My heart is in the right place,
It’s just my head that's out of whack.
Your understanding look;
Can you please not take it back?

Your loving look;
Returns to your eyes eventually;
I consider myself a lucky man
Every time they stare at me.
I will do my best to ensure 
I give no more reasons for the other stares.
Your loving look;
Can I take it with me everywhere?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
April 19, 2011 at 2:27 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 11:20 PM
such an interesting topic you came up with for this one, Joe. I really like it. Congratulations on a very well deserved win.
Guzzi Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 2:12 PM
Just wonderful as it always is when you write of your love for your wife! And a very great wrap up at the end. Congrad's Light & Love
Johnson Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 8:26 AM
I suspect that every wife has times when she uses each of these looks. Man can be so annoying and again so loving, she has to have a variety of looks to cast at him. All in fun Joe. This was very clever and worthy of a high win. Love, joyce
Brown Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 7:51 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Joe in Paula Swanson's contest "Beseech". Love, Carol
George   Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 4:44 AM
I have always looked into people's eyes to find the truth -they never lie. Sensational writing Joe. Many congrats on your WIN. Lainie
Sweetheart Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 1:00 AM
Congrats Joe on your wonderful win in the Beseech contest luv.. another great write and win to enjoy with luv..
Mantle Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 12:56 AM
I loved the progression of looks in this piece, and loved the sentiment in 4th stanza. Well done in the contest. Many congrats, best wishes Em :)
Poet Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 10:21 PM
Excellent write Joe.Congrats on your win in the contest---kashinath
Onclaud Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 11:41 AM
oh joe... all those kinds of looks make this piece a fascinating one! winning wishes to you! :) huggs, nette
Mantle Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 11:33 AM
A great write Joe. Well crafted, and passionately written. Best wishes in the contest Em :)
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