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Your Light

The light in you Conquers the dark in me The good in you Soothes the hate in me The love in you Brings out the love in me Gone is my darkness Gone is my hate Your light shines In my heart As we walk together In this love

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/20/2020 8:46:00 PM

Back with congrats, Timothy. There is a beautiful dynamic in this poem.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 4/20/2020 8:48:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words.

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 6/12/2019 1:30:00 PM

Such a sweetly written poem! Loved reading it! -Smita

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/12/2019 5:35:00 PM

Thank you Smita, Great name Smita

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/7/2019 5:40:00 PM

Hello Timothy McGuire, I can see the couple walking hand in hand. Have a nice evening my friend.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/7/2019 7:15:00 PM

You are right thank you Darlene!

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 6/7/2019 7:15:00 PM

You too! <3

Alkas Poetry

Date: 5/31/2019 2:18:00 PM

Dear poet this is the way is has to be... Adorable love poem... salute alkas

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/31/2019 3:01:00 PM

Thank you Alkas!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 5/28/2019 2:38:00 AM

True story. Nice one. Kai

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/28/2019 7:20:00 AM

Thank you Kai

Silent One

Date: 5/27/2019 6:32:00 AM

Simply beautiful.. Congrats on POTD..

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/27/2019 6:50:00 PM

Thank you Silent One!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/25/2019 5:10:00 PM

A loving tribute to your mate Tim. Congratulations on your deserving POTD honors! This is beautiful! : ) xxoo

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/25/2019 11:20:00 PM

Thank you so much Connie

Manmath Dalei

Date: 5/24/2019 9:34:00 PM

Wonderful poetry

Sandi Maddox Hoot

Date: 5/24/2019 7:04:00 PM

Beautiful

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/24/2019 9:28:00 PM

Thank you Sandi!

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/24/2019 3:43:00 PM

Ah, such is the power and beauty of love.. you have captured its essence so eloquently, Timothy. Your talent shines! Congratulations on your well-deserved and wonderful recognition with POTD honors. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/24/2019 6:01:00 PM

Thank you very much Susan!

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/24/2019 3:19:00 PM

Lovely verse my friend...Congrats!!! on POTD!!...happy endings...^WW^

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/24/2019 6:02:00 PM

Thanks WW!

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 5/24/2019 3:17:00 PM

A beautiful piece expertly penned Timothy. deserving and congrats on being POTD.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/24/2019 6:02:00 PM

Thank you Gordon

Charles Messina

Date: 5/24/2019 3:17:00 PM

Beautifully written, Timothy. Congratulations on POTD

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/24/2019 6:02:00 PM

Thank you Charles

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/24/2019 1:04:00 PM

Hi Timothy, Congratulations on being awarded POTD - a great honor for a truly deserved awesome poem. Hugs, Jennifer.

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/24/2019 6:03:00 PM

Thank you Jennifer! :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 5/24/2019 12:44:00 PM

Beautiful in every way. Your thoughts lift me up. This should be printed and placed everywhere, for all to see. Congratulations Timothy, on Poem of the Day. A favorite for me. :) Brandy

Timothy Mcguire
Date: 5/24/2019 6:03:00 PM

Thank you so much Brandy!