James Inman Poet Jueju

Your Jaded Emotions

emerald shadows below
     confused, twisted limbs still grow
          your heart, like tangled vines, lies,
you see me through jaded eyes


03/24/17

Used all three as theme, Jungle, Jumble and Jaded

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Kim Merryman April 13, 2017 at 4:08 PM Great descriptive language, James! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim James Inman April 13, 2017 at 7:06 PM Thank you Kim.

Debbie Duncan April 10, 2017 at 7:28 PM Love this, 7 and more :) James Inman April 11, 2017 at 10:12 AM Thank you Debbie.

Charlie Smith April 6, 2017 at 9:22 PM Wonderful James, congratulations... James Inman April 7, 2017 at 9:02 AM Thank you Charlie.

Becca Teagan April 4, 2017 at 3:16 PM ohhh this is really nice! I love it. James Inman April 5, 2017 at 7:35 AM Thanks for the kind comment Becca.

Cheryl Hoffman April 3, 2017 at 8:47 PM Awesome jueju James! Congratulations on a fine win!~Che :) James Inman April 4, 2017 at 7:18 AM Thanks Cheryl.

Andrea Dietrich April 2, 2017 at 7:52 PM And now I see you won!!! Congrats, my friend. James Inman April 2, 2017 at 9:27 PM Thank you for visiting again Andrea.

Constance La France April 2, 2017 at 4:50 PM James congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Jueju I liked it alot James Inman April 2, 2017 at 9:26 PM Thank you so much BW. Another wonderful contest that you have hosted. Thank you for your time.

Andrea Dietrich April 1, 2017 at 10:19 AM wow, what a creative way to do it. Combining all three!! I don't see congrats beneath here and have not checked out all the winners but I hope when I get around to reviewing the winners, I will see your name there. James Inman April 1, 2017 at 5:59 PM Thanks Andrea.

Janice Canerdy March 30, 2017 at 11:26 AM A 7 for your concise, meaningful poem, James. That's right. So often people see us through their own particular "eyes"! Janice James Inman March 30, 2017 at 12:00 PM Thanks Janice.

Doug Vinson March 26, 2017 at 3:20 PM James. : ) A concentrated, rich poem - the pleasure of poetry is here. James Inman March 26, 2017 at 8:02 PM Thank you Doug.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2017 at 1:00 PM - Touching and beautiful written, James - Good luck in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) James Inman March 24, 2017 at 6:37 PM Thank you Anne-Lise. Have a nice weekend as well.