Tim Smith Poet Rhyme

Your Impression On My Heart

Lay your hand upon my chest

Pressing hard with all your might

Then place your head there to rest

Dream some dreams with me tonight


We'll soar into the enchanted sky

Gaze intimately at the moon

glowing effulgent in your eye

as my heart begins to swoon



When you're gone I'll always feel

your impression on my heart

Knowing that our love is real

and our souls will never part

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Sharon Gulley December 18, 2014 at 9:28 PM Really like this one Tim, such a romantic and sweet read. Great write...Sharon G.

Arlene Smith December 10, 2014 at 10:18 PM Tim, I haven't been around in a while. Trying to get in a few good reads. Chose this one first from your list to see what the poetic vibe was on my be... Wow!! This is a truly magnificent love poem, my friend!!!.. Hugs.. Arlene Tim Smith December 10, 2014 at 10:20 PM Happy birthday :) Arlene Smith December 10, 2014 at 10:19 PM On my birthday!.. Still loathe spell check!! Tim Smith December 10, 2014 at 10:19 PM Thanks Arlene...good to see you back....hugs Tim

Ovidiu Bocsa December 10, 2014 at 10:14 AM Touching thoughts,gestures and feelings proving a gentle and noble soul I enjoyed this calling serenity rite of sharing the soul: Lay your hand upon my chest/ Pressing hard with all your might/ Then place your head there to rest... Tim Smith December 10, 2014 at 10:21 PM Thank you Ovidiu.... Hugs Tim

Aiyah Torres December 4, 2014 at 1:37 PM How I wish I could lay my head upon that chest. . how romantic write ,my friend! :) well done!

Maurice Yvonne December 3, 2014 at 1:04 PM Very nice!

James Fraser December 2, 2014 at 1:19 PM An impression you've certainly made with this lovely romantic poem Tim. Delightful to read, James :)

Demetrios Trifiatis December 2, 2014 at 9:10 AM Irresistibly romantic! Upon her heart, your poem, with indelible characters would be written! Excellent my friend Tim!

Eve Roper December 1, 2014 at 10:24 PM I love this one Tim, her impression on your heart. Blessing to you my freind 7

David Meade December 1, 2014 at 5:05 PM You have a strong heart my friend -- may it lead you to all of your dreams. Nicely done good friend.

Charmaine Chircop December 1, 2014 at 3:35 PM Its very beautiful Tim.For whoever this poem is..I'm sure She'd love it.WoW! Tim Smith December 1, 2014 at 3:40 PM I hope my peach loves it. It is my gift to her for her upcoming trip...hugs Tim xxx

Casarah Nance December 1, 2014 at 3:28 PM Aww hope there is no bruises from pushing too hard. Such sweet and dreamy words Tim. Your muse is making music like a symphony, well played!

Brenda Meier-Hans December 1, 2014 at 3:20 PM I love this Tim. Really beautiful.