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Your Impression On My Heart

Lay your hand upon my chest Pressing hard with all your might Then place your head there to rest Dream some dreams with me tonight We'll soar into the enchanted sky Gaze intimately at the moon glowing effulgent in your eye as my heart begins to swoon When you're gone I'll always feel your impression on my heart Knowing that our love is real and our souls will never part

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Sharon Gulley

Date: 12/18/2014 9:28:00 PM

Really like this one Tim, such a romantic and sweet read. Great write...Sharon G.

Arlene Smith

Date: 12/10/2014 10:18:00 PM

Tim, I haven't been around in a while. Trying to get in a few good reads. Chose this one first from your list to see what the poetic vibe was on my be... Wow!! This is a truly magnificent love poem, my friend!!!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Tim Smith
Date: 12/10/2014 10:20:00 PM

Happy birthday :)

Arlene Smith
Date: 12/10/2014 10:19:00 PM

On my birthday!.. Still loathe spell check!!

Tim Smith
Date: 12/10/2014 10:19:00 PM

Thanks Arlene...good to see you back....hugs Tim

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 12/10/2014 10:14:00 AM

Touching thoughts,gestures and feelings proving a gentle and noble soul I enjoyed this calling serenity rite of sharing the soul: Lay your hand upon my chest/ Pressing hard with all your might/ Then place your head there to rest...

Tim Smith
Date: 12/10/2014 10:21:00 PM

Thank you Ovidiu.... Hugs Tim

Aiyah Torres

Date: 12/4/2014 1:37:00 PM

How I wish I could lay my head upon that chest. . how romantic write ,my friend! :) well done!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/3/2014 1:04:00 PM

Very nice!

James Fraser

Date: 12/2/2014 1:19:00 PM

An impression you've certainly made with this lovely romantic poem Tim. Delightful to read, James :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/2/2014 9:10:00 AM

Irresistibly romantic! Upon her heart, your poem, with indelible characters would be written! Excellent my friend Tim!

Eve Roper

Date: 12/1/2014 10:24:00 PM

I love this one Tim, her impression on your heart. Blessing to you my freind 7

David Meade

Date: 12/1/2014 5:05:00 PM

You have a strong heart my friend -- may it lead you to all of your dreams. Nicely done good friend.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/1/2014 3:35:00 PM

Its very beautiful Tim.For whoever this poem is..I'm sure She'd love it.WoW!

Tim Smith
Date: 12/1/2014 3:40:00 PM

I hope my peach loves it. It is my gift to her for her upcoming trip...hugs Tim xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 12/1/2014 3:28:00 PM

Aww hope there is no bruises from pushing too hard. Such sweet and dreamy words Tim. Your muse is making music like a symphony, well played!

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 12/1/2014 3:20:00 PM

I love this Tim. Really beautiful.