Your Heavenly Eyes

I awoke with thoughts flashing in my head
I knew I had to write them down
So I got out of bed.
A thought of a love so pure, so fine
And I couldn’t get it out of my mind.
Those piercing eyes looking at me
Telling me to put it into poetry.
           SO HERE IT IS
Your eyes attracted me from afar
Like the tail of a shooting star
I longed to hold you and make a wish
And taste the sweetness of your kiss.
To have you brighten up my darkest night
And send my heart into flight.
To feel the warmth of that fiery fire
And fulfilling my every desire.
All of this I could see as your eyes holds the mysteries
And taking me into the depths of your soul
And making me completely whole.
Like a whirlpool I am pulled down
I try to scream but I have no sound.
I am falling deeper and deeper with no end in sight
Yet I am calm in this journey of delight.
This whirlpool is starting to slow its pace
As I see your beautiful face.
And on this I cannot deny
That I have found heaven in your eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/6/2014 9:23:00 PM
Truly shocked that this has had no comments. Bravo on a great write! True passion from past experience I gather ?
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Date: 5/7/2014 7:32:00 PM
thank you so much for your comment robert it means a lot to me.
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