Your Hard-Top 88

Can this really be year fifty-five that we now celebrate
That day of endless pleasure in your Hard-Top Eighty-Eight?
Old Fred had said to see him wed I’d have to bring a date
Then you were there with flaming hair and Hard-Top Eighty-Eight.

Though six years old it shined like new and you at twenty-four
The loveliest of redheads were, so then and there I swore
That somewhere I would find the nerve to ask you for a date
And one day you and I would fly that Hard-Top Eighty-Eight.

Was that way back in sixty-one? My how the years flew by.
It seems like only yesterday we told old Fred good-bye.
Though that party ended early our trip home would have to wait;
A night of romance beckoned from your Hard-Top Eighty-Eight.

Cross town to Eddie Bohn’s we flew, then Pat and Pat’s till dark,
Then up into the mountains searching out a place to park.
But none could know that night there, nor even speculate
What sparks we would ignite there in your Hard-Top Eighty-Eight.

For that night sparked an inferno that still blazes to this day,
Though some details may be sketchy if not lost along the way.
Yet as dreams rekindle memories may the world commemorate
That birthplace of our endless love, your Hard-Top Eighty-Eight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/4/2016 3:00:00 AM
I Love this nice love story! Great write. Happy you have a great marriage mate.
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Date: 12/9/2015 9:03:00 PM
Here's the original version: http://www.warrendickman.com/lyricpoetry2.htm#HT88 Copy and paste it into the address bar.
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Date: 12/8/2015 1:42:00 AM
this was great, had me smiling ear to ear the whole time I was reading it
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Warren Dickman
Date: 12/8/2015 2:06:00 PM
Thanks, Fran. Glad you liked it. -w
Date: 12/7/2015 11:15:00 PM
Greetings Warren. Congratulations for having your wonderful poem featured in the Poetry Soup home page! ;-)
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Date: 12/7/2015 10:12:00 AM
This lovely in many ways, rhyme and flow seem perfect, the story is awesome, the sentiment is heartfelt, that you're adding to it each year is amazing. Congratulation on the years together.
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Warren Dickman
Date: 12/10/2015 8:33:00 AM
Thank you, Susan. It's all factual just as it happened 54 years ago when I was 27 and she was 24. The good part is that we are still very much in love but we show it in different ways. She just fixed me a big glass of green juice made of spinach, kale, carrots, cucumber, celery, apple, and two small cuties. It was delicious and we both expect to enjoy at least another twenty years together.
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Warren Dickman
Date: 12/10/2015 8:04:00 AM
Thank you, Susan. It's all factual just as it happened 54 years ago when I was 27 and she was 24. The good part is that we are still very much in love but we show it in different ways. She just fixed me a big glass of green juice made of spinach, kale, carrots, cucumber, celery, apple, and two small cuties. It was delicious and we both expect to enjoy at least another twenty years together.
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