Your Going To Get a Good Whooping

amidst raised marsh land
whooping cranes forges ahead
probing with their bills
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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September 22, 2008 at 4:35 PM
A beautiful vivid image and very clever. Well done. regards Heidie
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September 21, 2008 at 3:48 PM
Katherine, the imagery of this write is truly fantastic, I believe that line 2 has 6 syllables instead of 7... still a very beautiful read. Thank you for sharing :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell
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