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Your Girl

Take these old hands into yours remember how they felt when they were unwrinkled and belonged to a young girl. Take this tired smile honey I know you don't miss and see the temptation of passion that even now old, burns with a deep desire for your kiss. Take my grey touched, raven hair and let it dance through your fingers as if you do not care. Take these older hazel, green eyes and see that when looking at you they still youthfully shine. Take this old heart for it is still yours and lend to it the thought that I am no matter how old, still the same, your girl.

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Catherine Labeau

Date: 7/5/2015 11:30:00 PM

lucky for love to last love not the word more like we have each other back

Sharon Gulley
Date: 7/7/2015 8:11:00 PM

Hello Catherine, so nice to hear from you. Ty for stopping by and for commenting....Sharon : )

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/14/2015 2:30:00 PM

Congratulations on your win:) Alexis

Sharon Gulley
Date: 6/17/2015 8:20:00 AM

Thank you, Alexis

John Lawless

Date: 6/14/2015 6:27:00 AM

Congrats on your placement in the contest. You beautifully express the true meaning of the statement "An old love is not a cold love"

Sharon Gulley
Date: 6/14/2015 10:31:00 AM

Thank you, John for the congrats and the wonderful comment. God Bless and have a wonderful day....Sharon :)

Hannington Mumo

Date: 6/7/2015 9:35:00 AM

Thanks for your overzealously astute pen. I think this ought to win the contest hands down. Kudos..7/7.

Sharon Gulley
Date: 6/7/2015 2:49:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Hannington for stopping by to read and for leaving such a wonderful comment. Have a blessed and wonderful day....Sharon :)

Neva Romaine

Date: 6/4/2015 1:39:00 PM

Hey Sharon, stopped by for a visit and found this wonderful poem from you. A beautiful tribute to aging love and passion. Best wishes in the contest! Be Blessed, Neva

Sharon Gulley
Date: 6/6/2015 3:17:00 PM

Hello, My dearest Neva. Hope you are having a wonderfully delightful day. Thank you so much for stopping by to read and for leaving such a sweet and awesome comment on my work. Always love hearing from you. Hugs.....Sharon :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2015 5:31:00 PM

this is SUPERB. FAVE!!!!

Sharon Gulley
Date: 6/6/2015 3:16:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Andrea for the awesome comment and for adding as a Fav. Have a blessed and wonderful day. Hugs.....Sharon :)

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/2/2015 8:36:00 AM

Excellent. Beautifully written. Enjoyed reading it. TFS

Sharon Gulley
Date: 6/3/2015 1:28:00 PM

Thank you so much Ravi, for stopping by to read and for leaving such a sweet and appreciated comment. Have a wonderfully blessed day.....Sharon :)

Catherine Labeau

Date: 5/30/2015 2:39:00 PM

yes my girl my hands are wrinkled and freckled at age sixty two i am still waiting for a white hair to show my glory as an heart never gest old

Sharon Gulley
Date: 5/31/2015 1:16:00 PM

Hello my Dearest Catherine, Hope your day is going wonderful. Yes age has it's way of telling on us. I have to admit though, I do enjoy the wisdom that comes with it. I may go all silver haired next year for a new look, ha, ha, ha. Why not Huh? Fab at 50, Sexy at 60, ha, ha, ha. That is what my mother always said anyways. Love you, Sharon