Your Garden

Who would have known,
that such beautiful flowers,
could grow from a place darkness?
Yet these flowers sprouted out of your pain and suffering.

I walk breathlessly through your garden,
inhaling the heady aroma.
I listen to words spoken,
feeling the gentle touch tickle my ears.
When I see the color of your dreams, 
my heart celebrates your magnificence.
My rejuvinated spirit rises with your scent,
Still I am securely tethered by your roots.
You cradle me in delicate petals,
giving security to my soul.

I lay down upon your soil,
listening to your flowers whispering.
Your moisture,
soaks into my skin.
Your essence lives within my pores.
There is a rhythm,
for you are organic,
ever changing,
subtle and bold.
You are both serene and demanding!

I am constantly surprised,
as you transform before my eyes.
You are my oasis of softness.
You are my place of comfort and renewal.
The rebirth of my joy,
a safe haven beyond life's storms.
Yours is a magical Garden,
blooming in all seasons.

I will tend to your garden,
removing the weeds,
watering and nurturing your seeds.
Let me luxuriate in your soil,
for I long to be your source of light.
Let me filter through your atmosphere.
For should I live a million years
Not once would I ever wish,
to leave your garden.

Dedicated to my Sweetie
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Nance Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 11:47 AM
I'm going to fav this one because it grows into me with hope that vines of caring and caressing never die
Lamoureux Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 11:54 AM
Thanks Casarah, if you have a chance I posted a new one this morning. I think you might appreciate it.
Nance Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 7:41 AM
aww...this was wonderful, it bloomed with you tender hands...what a lucky sweetie, you are a skilled gardener.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 10:02 AM
I just rewrote it, tell me what you think???
Lamoureux Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 9:24 AM
You are kind Casarah.
Seal Avatar
July 8, 2013 at 5:40 PM
I'm having another run through some of yours Rick, My trek gets longer everytime I visit, can hardly keep up. This is a beautiful write to someone special, it's lovely and very cleverly written. Take care, Richard
Lamoureux Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 8:27 AM
Hi Richard, thanks for looking through and reading my poems. You are always a welcome guest.
Vaso Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 9:34 AM
A very beautiful poem! Loved it!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 4:26 PM
Thanks Arthur.
Tacito Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 8:22 AM
YES!!!!!!!!!! I have man-goosebumps! :) Very, very touching!!! May you both continue to water each other's roots.
Lamoureux Avatar
July 3, 2013 at 4:27 PM
Ha ha that is my chuckle for the day.
Gunatillake Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 12:29 PM
yes, You are a lucky Gardner who receive flowers in all seasons! very romantic I really enjoyed this piece of art. Thanks for your comment Richard. Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 7:30 AM
I am a thankful Gardner.
Richards Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 9:48 AM
There is a breathless quality in this lovely poem!!
Lamoureux Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 10:22 AM
Thanks Carrie.
Bono Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 9:15 AM
awesome soup mail delivered
Lamoureux Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 10:22 AM
Thanks Collen, I enjoyed your soup mail.
Van Breda Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 6:09 AM
What a 'beautiful garden' you must have to have inspired such emotive words
Lamoureux Avatar
June 30, 2013 at 10:21 AM
Thanks Kim, she is extrordinary and ever changing accept in the ways that matter most.
Honeytip Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 11:39 PM
Nawwwwwwww!! That is what I say ;^)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 11:50 PM
What does Nawwwwww mean???
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 6:43 PM
Your garden of love is stunningly beautiful. Feelings from your heart lovingly conveyed Richard. I hope you and your significant other is enjoying the weekend. Warm Smiles, Connie.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 9:47 PM
Thanks Connie, I am smiling back.
Horne Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 3:06 PM
this is lovely, my friend - congrats on your wins : )
Lamoureux Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 9:47 PM
Thanks Jack
Anglesey Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 2:28 PM
Richard, your ability to create such stunning metaphor is awesome. Beautiful sentiment and genuine feeling makes it breathtaking :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 9:53 PM
Thanks Karen, you are very Kind.
Manassian Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 10:00 AM
Very beautiful, Richard. Hope your sweetie loves poetry. This should just make her bloom with happiness. Great write.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 9:56 PM
Just getting in, my sweetie originally wasn't into poetry but has come to appreciate it. She is in Vancouver this weekend so I am missing her.
Bono Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 9:10 AM
Your wife must be so proud.First one finally,been a bit.I will soup mail you sometime today about something awesome.Colleen
Lamoureux Avatar
June 29, 2013 at 9:59 PM
Still waiting for the awesome news.
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