Your Flushed

The balance will never go down
Account holders shall only frown
Visa and Master 
Card decks fill with laughter
While consumers toil as the clown

Author's note:  The rates they charge and the time it takes to pay off revolving credit ensnares the naive and the desperate.  It is part of a plan.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Laurie Avatar
October 27, 2015 at 3:00 AM
G'day Duke... credit cards are the modern day highway robbery and it's legal. No wonder there are revolutions - Lindsay
Duncan Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 1:37 AM
Great write,,, I have no credit card debt. I refuse to play that game. Though I just bought a 48 inch smart TV from Target on my Target card $544.80. Before that I had a 60 inch dinosaur :) I owe $95;00 which I will pay off Sept. :)
Macfarlane Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 11:07 AM
Excellent write on the topic of credit card holders, once most people get roped in, they can't escape the impending noose. Hugs
Duncan Avatar
July 6, 2013 at 12:33 PM
You are so very " right on" 22% is off the wall. And I just WON'T do it . thank you for reading My Salvation,, Mel never should of left his wife & kids for her . I like his work ;}
Breidenthal Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 2:40 PM
I agree with this poem. Once again, a very clever way of getting the message out. I appreciate your side notes as well. Keep up the excellent Limericks! Always, Laura
A   Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 4:31 PM
cyber shopping just isn't safe.. period! enjoyed your write,.. ~always, Linda
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 11:04 PM
It's all so horrible. I don't know what will become of society, my friend.
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