Your First Stare

is short-lived.
Deep.
Like a crypt
yet coherently-linked
with your windblown hair
strewn with rubberclips poly-carbonated.

Candid.
As a sneeze 
yet non-allergenic.

On its last seconds,
its supremacy 
situated along the alleys of lashes
tightly-knit my lips
as if all-perceiving:

blunt 
as a snore

yet

casual 
as a yawn

etched 
on heart's core.

Be that as it may
as i hang endured
for its sequel...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 5/14/2009 7:09:00 PM
Just read this poem of yours. I loved it! little wonder why you won first place. -AA
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Date: 2/27/2009 5:55:00 PM
Gino congratulations on winning Johns contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/27/2009 12:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 2/27/2009 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your writing winning John's contest ... I look forward to reading more of your writes soon ... this site is overwhelming with folks to "comment" on ... LOL ...
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Date: 2/27/2009 9:53:00 AM
Congrats on your first place win.
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Date: 2/27/2009 7:18:00 AM
Congrats Gino on your First Place win! Well done! Love, Shar
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Date: 2/27/2009 6:58:00 AM
This is soo excellent....wow, I'm blown away. First place ...hooray for you, Gino. Perfect choice! Congratulations! ~ Carrie
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Date: 2/27/2009 6:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your first place win.. wonderful poem... Spirit and Soul, Constance
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Date: 2/27/2009 5:56:00 AM
situated along the alleys of lashes..loved this line! Congrad's Debbie
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Date: 2/27/2009 1:43:00 AM
well done... beautiful write! congrats on your win! ~ Arany
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