Your Fiery Eyes

From the bow of your fiery eyes

A glance, like an arrow, was released

That pierced my mesmerized heart

Which was exhilarated and pleased! 

  


© Demetrios Trifiatis
       02 August 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nunez Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 8:59 PM
Fiery eyes...they say the eyes are the windows to the soul. She must be of an intense nature then. Glad to read this romantic write from you today, sire. hugs!
Trifiatis Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 5:55 AM
Thank you dearest, Kim for visiting and commenting. hugs.
Smith Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 11:17 AM
Beautiful and so romantic...I love this
Trifiatis Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 5:56 AM
Wonderful to receive your visit, Tim. Thank you!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 8:59 AM
She sounds dangerous!
Trifiatis Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 5:57 AM
In love, my friend, Richard, we have to take risks. Ha-ha! Thank you!
Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 7:24 AM
- Adorable and lovely written - (7) - I wish you a great Sunday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 8:11 AM
Thank you , Anne-Lise for your lovely comment and grading! Have a great Sunday! Hugs
Bateman Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 4:43 AM
Herr Professor!! Ich finde dieses Gedicht ganz toll zu sein. Anytime I see "fiery eyes," "arrow," and "mesmerized" in one thought, then I know this though and its meaning shall be quite poignant and powerful. Das freut mich auch sehr!! A "7" too. Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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August 2, 2015 at 4:47 AM
Danke sehr, mein guter freund, Gary, es freuts mich das du gefelt es. You are generous and kind. It is always great pleasure to see your comments. Thank you!
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