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Your Face Could Launch a Thousand Ships

You were beautiful to look at No one could deny Your smile The red stain Your face could launch a thousand ships What passed your lips would sink them 05/31/18 Laura Loo Free Verse Only- Pick a Theme Poetry Contest

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Jack Ellison

Date: 7/13/2018 2:48:00 PM

I'm giving myself shit for not visiting sweet Mo! I apologize... lovesies, Happy Jack XOX

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/13/2018 6:26:00 PM

Hey, you're here now <3

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/16/2018 10:38:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Maureen. Well done.

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/16/2018 3:36:00 PM

Hello Maureen, A marvelous free verse!! And best congratulations on your win!! The closing verse speaks volumes. Superb!! Best Wishes, Gary

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/16/2018 6:38:00 PM

Thank you so much Gary! :) xomo

Curtis Moorman

Date: 6/8/2018 11:45:00 PM

Enough said, Mo!!! lol Congrats on your win.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/9/2018 6:35:00 AM

;p Thank you Curtis! xomo

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/8/2018 9:02:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Maureen :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/9/2018 6:36:00 AM

Thank you Heidi :) xomo!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/8/2018 8:12:00 AM

- A short greeting and congratulations on your great winning poem, Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/8/2018 8:51:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise :) xomo!

Lu Loo

Date: 6/8/2018 7:54:00 AM

loved the last line, great poem sweet Maureen , thank you and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/8/2018 8:01:00 AM

Thank you Luloo! That was a fun fun contest :) xomo!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/4/2018 10:58:00 PM

A slasher of a poem, Mo...As the Psalmist writes: "Life and Death are in the power of the tongue." Kudos, gw

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/5/2018 7:55:00 AM

Oh that's a sharp line. Thank you my friend :) xomo!

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/3/2018 1:06:00 PM

I that have seen such beauty, fallen beneath its gleam, reject my life's duty, to wade thus in its stream.... I wrote this poem fragment in 1976, seems to fit the shining gem you have just presented. A FAV..

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/3/2018 12:54:00 PM

edited as this post had errors in presentation...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/3/2018 1:07:00 PM

Many in her wake would relate Robert. Thank you so kindly. Lovely to read you today Robert. I am having my own health issues and have to cut back screen time, am thus doubly happy to hear from you. Peace and tenderness my friend. xomo