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you see what is there the others see what they want truth...their perspective they chose their lenses you see with your naked eye diamond in the rough to them I am veiled layers of misconceptions their vision is blurred with you I am me there's no fear in your presence YOUR eyes see BEAUTY Jade "Beauty is in the eye of the beholder"..... and you have beautiful eyes for that.....I am grateful!

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Date: 5/13/2015 1:19:00 AM
What an immensely beautiful poem here..."to them I am veiled layers of misconceptions their vision is blurred" I can understand that... well done! I am so grateful to be able to read your work - so much beauty here! <3 Always, Laura
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Date: 5/12/2015 11:16:00 PM
If I see a woman full of verse and words, I am enthralled with her inner beauty!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/13/2015 12:47:00 AM
:) Oh....well, you've come to the right place then! ;)
Date: 5/12/2015 10:44:00 PM
I see beauty in your words, your emotions, your imagines you choose to share . . . I have never met you in person but I have tasted the love you have poured into your works -- sweet and delicious! If beauty is in the eye of the beholder -- than I am blessed to see your great beauty LO.
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/12/2015 10:58:00 PM
:) You are a sweet, kind, compassionate and dear friend to me, David. Never underestimate the worth of your presence in my life. It brings beauty....Hugs. LO thanks you! :)
Date: 5/12/2015 4:13:00 PM
a beautiful message in a beautifully written poem. nice one, eileen...
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/12/2015 10:56:00 PM
Thanks, dear. I love seeing your face on my page. :) Hugs
Date: 5/12/2015 1:16:00 PM
Hi Eileen! I am sure that there are many eyes that see both outer and inner beauty. I pity those who can't see beyond the surface, or else choose to ignore reality. Hugs // paul
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/12/2015 10:57:00 PM
So have I....on so many fronts. It hasn't been easy...I'm better now...just. Thanks for the second reply. Hugs :)
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Paul Callus
Date: 5/12/2015 1:57:00 PM
I have missed you too; been dealing and coping with life's problems. :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/12/2015 1:18:00 PM
Paul....Apassionata has missed you. I'm so happy to have you visit me. You are a dear friend. If you see beauty in me, then....there must be some there. Thank you. Hugs
Date: 5/12/2015 11:10:00 AM
My eyes see beauty...A great beauty of a poem. So meaningful. The world sees what it wants to see...blinded by misconceptions...Thank you for sharing this. 7
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/12/2015 12:35:00 PM
Thank you, Nandita. I'm glad that you see that way. :) Bless you for the visit. Hugs
Date: 5/12/2015 11:03:00 AM
Very nice touch Eileen, A truly beautiful Senryu, Look deep and discover more!! Best Wishes Kevin
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/12/2015 12:34:00 PM
Thank you for the visit, Kevin. I'm glad you connect to this piece. Will swim by to visit you. :)
Date: 5/12/2015 10:12:00 AM
wow Eileen... loved this one... and I second your thoughts... people see what they want to see... no one is concerned to know the truth, but at the same time they fail to realise they are blinded... I am glad there is someone with beautiful eyes next to you... hugs, nad ..#7
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/12/2015 10:40:00 AM
Thanks, Nadiya. Richard has been a strong hold in my life. I appreciate his friendship. He sees the best in me....Even though we've had our little misunderstandings....it was never enough to break the friendship. :) Thanks for the visit. Hugs
Date: 5/12/2015 9:40:00 AM
Beauty indeed! I can think of no better way for you to be!
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/12/2015 10:42:00 AM
;)....back atcha!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/12/2015 10:00:00 AM
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/12/2015 9:44:00 AM
You inspired this, Rick. You know that. The comment on your Mirror poem. I wanted to respond to that, but....decided not to. This is my response. You were the inspiration. Thank you.

Book: Shattered Sighs