Your Eyes

They are as oceans,
Vast, deep, and open;
Unfathomable.
I dive into them,
Drawn in with each look.

They are the night sky,
A fractal beauty;
Sophisticated.
I would spend my hours
Just exploring them.

Windows of your soul,
Exquisite blue rifts.
Incomparable.
With each fleeting glance
My heart and soul soar.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Babu Avatar
August 29, 2015 at 8:07 PM
very nice and romantic poem, beautiful.
Deremer Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 5:50 PM
Very nice! Thank you for sharing.
Allison Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 3:04 PM
oh Neil this is simply charming a beautiful romantic write:-) hugs jan xx 7
Nelson Avatar
July 16, 2015 at 3:38 PM
Hey there Jan, thank you for the feedback. Just changed a couple of little things hope you still approve. Just replaced a little repetition, hope it still carries the same feeling.
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