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Your Eyes

Your eyes pierce me
I feel the heat
Of their incredible glow
Your eyes flow through me
Like liquid fire
Searing every pore
That I exist in
Your eyes are burning daggers
Decimating my body
Hurling the heat of sun
Into my wilting being 
Your two heat packed eyes
Have blown away
My dejected self
Your eyes have destroyed me
Just by the demon fire
They have created
Burning me to ashes
Blown into the hot wind

Russell Sivey

Entrant into Debbie Guzzi's "HEAT" contest

7/23/2012

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Tanya Harrington

Date: 8/2/2012 8:31:00 PM

Congrats. Excellent write, such searing heat in those eyes! :) Tanya

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2012 7:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Debbie''s "Heat" contest Russell. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 8/1/2012 2:57:00 PM

Russell congrats on your win...my eyes see a great poem..David

Jack Horne

Date: 7/24/2012 1:18:00 PM

powerful write here, my friend - you described 'that look' so well - it made me think of my ex, lol

L.Ruby Meyer

Date: 7/24/2012 3:23:00 AM

Thank you for sharing this! very powerful, very masculine, and very effective! peace x Ruby

Don Johnson

Date: 7/24/2012 2:33:00 AM

fire of eye doth burn the soul, hot kisses, damning hot to hold, melting of the burnished gold, see it in the mind of eye, a sissling of the eye pig stye, a mercy killing bye n by, all done by dentist drill, a touch of over-kill, did Santa Claus come by? inspired by Russell Sivey 'Your eyes' Don

Joann Grisetti

Date: 7/23/2012 8:57:00 PM

Searing eyes here, must wear shades to keep the sizzle in. Great write.