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Your Eyes

Your eyes pierce me I feel the heat Of their incredible glow Your eyes flow through me Like liquid fire Searing every pore That I exist in Your eyes are burning daggers Decimating my body Hurling the heat of sun Into my wilting being Your two heat packed eyes Have blown away My dejected self Your eyes have destroyed me Just by the demon fire They have created Burning me to ashes Blown into the hot wind Russell Sivey Entrant into Debbie Guzzi's "HEAT" contest 7/23/2012

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Tanya Harrington

Date: 8/2/2012 8:31:00 PM

Congrats. Excellent write, such searing heat in those eyes! :) Tanya

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2012 7:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Debbie''s "Heat" contest Russell. Love, Carol

David Williams

Date: 8/1/2012 2:57:00 PM

Russell congrats on your win...my eyes see a great poem..David

Jack Horne

Date: 7/24/2012 1:18:00 PM

powerful write here, my friend - you described 'that look' so well - it made me think of my ex, lol

L.Ruby Meyer

Date: 7/24/2012 3:23:00 AM

Thank you for sharing this! very powerful, very masculine, and very effective! peace x Ruby

Don Johnson

Date: 7/24/2012 2:33:00 AM

fire of eye doth burn the soul, hot kisses, damning hot to hold, melting of the burnished gold, see it in the mind of eye, a sissling of the eye pig stye, a mercy killing bye n by, all done by dentist drill, a touch of over-kill, did Santa Claus come by? inspired by Russell Sivey 'Your eyes' Don

Joann Grisetti

Date: 7/23/2012 8:57:00 PM

Searing eyes here, must wear shades to keep the sizzle in. Great write.