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I'm sorry Is this ok Tell me how high And I'll jump " let's work together But what I say goes" Oh yes Of course Because this is your dictatorship After all I'm your doll A lifeless soulless corpse I am one with the dead To do your bidding Your obedient puppet I shall perform for you After all It is all you will allow me to do No one shall have me I am all for you Besides I have no chose in the matter Being the baby doll You think I am I wouldn't cry so much But you keep on hurting me I'm sorry I know I messed up After all every thing is my fault All your failures You blame on me I'm sorry I'll take the beating May it be mentally or physically I'm pretending for you Until the time is right I'll be your perfect doll But I warn you You will be even more dead then me by dawn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/6/2015 8:09:00 PM
oh my, that is a great twist I agree with Connie, this says it all, and in the end, the man can face the ultimate wrath of the woman abused for so many years.
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Date: 8/4/2015 11:42:00 AM
Living with someone who is domineering, pompous and narcissistic and abusive is a situation many women tollerate because they may have no choice. Your poem says it all and I can relate.
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Date: 6/23/2015 11:56:00 PM
Sorry for not posting sooner I have been extremely busy this June. I hope you enjoy this poem.
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