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Either focus on those who care about or focus on those lowlives who do not accept you as you are. That's the message of the poem. Choose wisely. Not all girls have the same attitude.

I’ve met a girl so kind, sweet and young The one who makes my soft heart refreshed I’ve met a girl with a biting tongue The kind that burns my sensitive flesh The one who makes my soft heart refreshed Is the one who is my long-lost twin The kind that burns my sensitive flesh Is the kind I would throw in the bin Is the one who is my long-lost twin The reason why I need my Lord to thank? Is the kind I would throw in the bin The reason why my memory’s blank? The reason why I need my Lord to thank? I’ve met a girl so kind, sweet and young The reason why my memory’s blank? I’ve met a girl with a biting tongue.

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