Your Cherry Blossom Lips

My fingers' tip-toeing on  your  face
 stopped at the softness of your lips,
   moonlit night guided my lips
       to your cherry blossom,
       a gentle Spring breeze
           melting like wax
               engulfed us
                with pure
                     joy.      




© kashinath karmakar 2011
by:kashinath karmakar( 20th March 2011)
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Placement:HM ;(March 2011)

Contest :Nonet me a Spring kiss

Sponsor:Michael J. Falotico


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Placement: 2nd;(June 2011)

Contest:Whatever Next

Sponsor:Brian Strand
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Dietrich Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 11:58 AM
rereading your beautiful nonet here, kash and wanted to stop by and say hi while I am here. I have lesson plans to get to but I am nearly caught up with comments. You never told me how you were doing yet!! I miss our chats.
Onclaud Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 9:56 AM
yes to a great win, kashi.. huggs!
Sweetheart Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 5:33 AM
Congrats Kash on your super big win in Brian's contest with this rare beauty write my friend..enjoy luv...
Mantle Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 5:18 AM
Congrats on your win. Great piece, love the expression in the first line. Best wishes Em :)
Fillmore Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 4:43 PM
Gorgeous imagery in this, Kashinath...congrats on your win! Thanks for your congrats for "A Trip Out of This World" win -- much appreciated! Carol
Haick Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 6:34 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Kashinath! Beautiful poem. Always, Annalise
K. Avatar
March 27, 2011 at 9:08 AM
This sure is a very sweet & romantic nonet, Kashinath! & very nice formatting here too :) btw there's a sneaky "s" that made its way in your title... hope you don't mind me pointing it out, just want to hel pas always :)
Bloomsfield Avatar
March 25, 2011 at 5:07 AM
a Spring kiss,indeed beautiful!
Horne Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 12:05 PM
Many congrats : ) Jack
Brown Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 6:18 AM
Congratulations on your win today in Michael's "Nonet Me A Kiss" contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
Neels Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 5:54 AM
I loved this one the first time I read it Kash, congratulations on your win :)
George   Avatar
March 24, 2011 at 2:55 AM
Very sensual Nonet Kashinath. Many congrat's on your win. Lainie
Mannan Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 8:54 PM
Indeed a pure joy to read. Some very warm congrats to to you dear friend.
Freeman Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 8:12 PM
Great to see your poem's success Kashinath. Congratulations on your worthy poem's successful HM. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 7:20 PM
Congratulations on the HM win in the contest of Michael, kashinath
Sweetheart Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 4:36 PM
Congrats Kashinath on your HM in Michael's contest on the Spring Kiss.. excellent words for your entry my friend.. enjoy your very special honor with luv..
Devonshire Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 3:04 PM
Kashinath, Congratulations on your success in Michael's contest! Love, Carolyn
Falotico Avatar
March 23, 2011 at 2:07 PM
Congrats on yopur success in my contest.. Thanks for the support..always Michael
Kendrick Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 12:53 PM
This is a very poetic and creative one..Wish you good luck in the contest..Reads like a sure winner to me..Thanks for visting my work "Laughable Experience"..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 12:09 PM
oyyy kashi! what a celebration of spring with your fabulous images.. winning's best to you.. come see my " bones in meditation." ..huggs, nette
Neels Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 9:32 AM
Engulfed in passion comes to mind Kash, lovely entry, good luck to you.. Hope your weekend's been good ;)
Sweetheart Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 7:29 PM
Such a precious scene and glorious write Kashinath.. u are a romantic at heart luv.. good luck in the new contest.. your Nonet is perfect...luv..
Dietrich Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 2:23 PM
ooh lalala, Kasinath, I LOVED those top lines there. FAVE for this one!
Horne Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 1:32 PM
Very passionate - looks like a winner to me : )
Devonshire Avatar
March 20, 2011 at 11:45 AM
So erotic and passionate, Kashinath! Truly a masterpiece in perfect Nonnet form. Wishing you success in Michael's contest. Love, Carolyn
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