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Brothers, hear me don't judge me.
For repentance in my heart--
Retrieve the rocks you hurled so free.
With love fill the empty cart.

Poetic form:  Chastushka 
© Dane Smith-Johnsen 11-12-09
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 13, 2009 at 9:57 AM
Excellent Chastushka, Dane! Peace and love, Audrey
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