Your Captivating Smile

You have the ability to beguile
With a subtle and unique style
  I love your captivating smile
  To capture it, I’d walk a mile
The mystery of you isn't hostile 
Your aura leaves me immobile 













Alexis Y.
03/07/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Lamoureux Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 6:08 AM
A sweet lovely piece. Thanks for your kind congrats. ;0)
Krutsinger Avatar
March 11, 2021 at 11:33 PM
Monorhymes are not easy; this one appears effortless, and I know it is not!
Proxenos Avatar
March 9, 2021 at 10:32 AM
A different rhyming , charming, delightful, complimentary, loving poem. Dear Alexis your writes are all so warm! Love and hugs, Jennifer.
Ball Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 11:12 AM
Ooohoohoo!Come into my parlor said the spider to the fly. Though his style is profound and his smile is so lovely these polished ones are the ones to watch out for. Nicely done my friend. I had a mental picture of Lyle Wagoner and his sparkling smile. Good one. God Bless, JB
Pettit Avatar
March 8, 2021 at 6:24 AM
I like your style all the while.
Buehler Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 7:25 PM
Hi Alexis, Your beautiful poem about being captivated, has captivated me! Best of wishes, Evelyn :)
Mcconnell Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 8:11 AM
brilliant imagery and great flow Alexis, really captivating piece indeed.
Y. Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 11:05 AM
Hi Gordon, Thank you so much.I appreciate that you took the time to read me today. Have a wonderful day:-)Alexis
Buhagiar Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 5:43 AM
Lovely monorhyme. He must be special.
Y. Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 11:03 AM
Hi Victor, Thank you so much. I appreciate your continued support. Have a wonderful day:-)Alexis
Mcintosh Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 5:31 AM
Lovely. So sweet... A smile is, indeed, captivating... especially when it shines from the eyes. Love to you always, God bless you too, Love, Gina
Y. Avatar
March 7, 2021 at 11:02 AM
Hi Regina, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you stopped by. Thanks for being the first souper to leave a comment. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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