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Your Captivating Smile

You have the ability to beguile With a subtle and unique style I love your captivating smile To capture it, I’d walk a mile The mystery of you isn't hostile Your aura leaves me immobile Alexis Y. 03/07/2021

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/16/2021 6:08:00 AM

A sweet lovely piece. Thanks for your kind congrats. ;0)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/11/2021 11:33:00 PM

Monorhymes are not easy; this one appears effortless, and I know it is not!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/9/2021 10:32:00 AM

A different rhyming , charming, delightful, complimentary, loving poem. Dear Alexis your writes are all so warm! Love and hugs, Jennifer.

Judy Ball

Date: 3/8/2021 11:12:00 AM

Ooohoohoo!Come into my parlor said the spider to the fly. Though his style is profound and his smile is so lovely these polished ones are the ones to watch out for. Nicely done my friend. I had a mental picture of Lyle Wagoner and his sparkling smile. Good one. God Bless, JB

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/8/2021 6:24:00 AM

I like your style all the while.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 3/7/2021 7:25:00 PM

Hi Alexis, Your beautiful poem about being captivated, has captivated me! Best of wishes, Evelyn :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/7/2021 8:11:00 AM

brilliant imagery and great flow Alexis, really captivating piece indeed.

Alexis Y.
Date: 3/7/2021 11:05:00 AM

Hi Gordon, Thank you so much.I appreciate that you took the time to read me today. Have a wonderful day:-)Alexis

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/7/2021 5:43:00 AM

Lovely monorhyme. He must be special.

Alexis Y.
Date: 3/7/2021 11:03:00 AM

Hi Victor, Thank you so much. I appreciate your continued support. Have a wonderful day:-)Alexis

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 3/7/2021 5:31:00 AM

Lovely. So sweet... A smile is, indeed, captivating... especially when it shines from the eyes. Love to you always, God bless you too, Love, Gina

Alexis Y.
Date: 3/7/2021 11:02:00 AM

Hi Regina, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you stopped by. Thanks for being the first souper to leave a comment. Have a great day:-) Alexis