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Your Canopies' Call

Your canopies' call
to wake them up from their sleep...
mere touch will not do





© kashinath karmakar (25th June 2011)
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 28, 2011 at 4:47 AM

just luv canopies Kash.. they are so pretty and u have made them beautiful in this piece luv..

Debbie Guzzi

June 27, 2011 at 4:30 AM

Hey Kash could you mean canape/tasty bite-sized appetizer: a bite-sized base of bread, cracker, or pastry with a topping, served as an appetizer or to accompany drinks ..cause this spelling gets you a tent awning? Light & Love

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

June 26, 2011 at 10:47 AM

Ah ok....I was wondering myself what would canopies connote- glad to see Andrea's comments below ;) Makes this senryu clearer to me. Wish you the best for this sensual piece, Kashinath :)!

James Foulk

June 26, 2011 at 8:21 AM

great write. thank you for commenting on Clouds touching the ground.

Andrea Dietrich

June 26, 2011 at 8:08 AM

Now that you explain canopies are breasts for you, I can get your senryu. Why not say "lovely breasts?" I'm curious to know where you saw them called canopies. Your poem is indeed sensuous!

Nette Onclaud

June 26, 2011 at 12:46 AM

kashi, you truly pulled me in .. suoerb!! winning wishes if for a contest! :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

June 25, 2011 at 11:44 PM

It sounds romantic, Kash!

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 25, 2011 at 6:34 PM

Deeply sensous write, kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

June 25, 2011 at 4:43 PM

soupmail.

Sara Kendrick

June 25, 2011 at 4:14 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative work..Oh! To be awakened under the canopy of nature..Great descriptive work..Thanks for the kind reviews of my work..Sara