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Your Bright Umbrella

the door has been closed

you stand outside in the rain

soaked in your despair

open your bright umbrella

storms pass; walk sprightly onward

Copyright © Andrea Dietrich | Year Posted 2016

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/6/2016 11:16:00 PM Andrew, Congrats on your "When A Door Closes WIN." Luv ~LINDA~ Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 4/5/2016 12:47:00 PM Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 4/5/2016 10:34:00 AM Hi Andrea, Congratulations on your win in the contest. An excellent Tanka. I find these types of forms really hard to do. You have done an excellent write on the theme, a different but wonderful write. I Love the vision, then i do Love to be out in the rain, helps me think. Hugs....Mike. Definitely a fave and a seven. Login to Reply

Winged Warrior Date: 4/4/2016 8:30:00 PM Congrats!!! on your win Andrea...god bless...^WW^ Login to Reply

Hansteven Selfa Date: 4/4/2016 9:04:00 AM Your works are truly heartfelt Andrea! I enjoyed this one! Congratulations and a 7 for you! :) _HANS Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 4/4/2016 3:14:00 AM Yet another lovely win Andrea.. big congrats! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 4/4/2016 12:51:00 AM wonderful metaphor Andrea many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply

Beautiful Scars Date: 4/3/2016 7:24:00 PM A wonderful tanka Andrea..congrats on your placement :)-luloo Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 3/30/2016 1:56:00 PM Yes, the umbrella metaphor. One word and I'm delighted. Love, daver Login to Reply

Kelly Deschler Date: 3/28/2016 9:24:00 PM Very uplifting and inspiring, and also appropriate in a way, as we are transitioning from a gray winter into spring... Beautifully penned, Andrea. Good luck in the contest! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/28/2016 4:13:00 PM Good one with underlying overtones of metaphoric language..Reads like a winner to me...Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 3/28/2016 12:09:00 PM Is this a metaphor for life? Rainy here today in NYC. Good luck in the contest and check out my latest when you get the chance. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/28/2016 3:52:00 PM YES!! Pure metaphor!

Robert Heemstra Date: 3/27/2016 7:34:00 PM Umbrellas! Rarely use one myself! Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 3/27/2016 4:01:00 PM Fantastic tanka Andrea. Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 3/27/2016 1:31:00 PM Very well expressed...best wishes.. Login to Reply