Your Blooming Horse

father

teach me 
how to ride 
 
your blooming horse

so I can bring home 
unto thee, my God  

without any scratch

this soul 
o’ mine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Fraser Avatar
September 20, 2009 at 7:25 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week>>James
Moreno Avatar
September 15, 2009 at 1:47 AM
Otsenre, congrats on having your work featured...Raul
Culverhouse Avatar
September 14, 2009 at 3:23 PM
nicely written, creative
Adeite Avatar
September 14, 2009 at 8:07 AM
This is a well deserved feature … what a creative, wonderful poem; your poem speaks for itself. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great Otsenre! Adeleke
Kendrick Avatar
September 14, 2009 at 4:47 AM
This week's featured poem is very expressive of your love for God. Congratulations on your work. Sara
Brown Avatar
September 14, 2009 at 3:25 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Otsenre. Love, Carol
Moreno Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 9:46 PM
Best of luck in the next round...Raul
Winter Avatar
March 31, 2009 at 7:00 AM
Congrats on all 3 poems making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals. Love, Shar
Reynolds Avatar
September 19, 2008 at 6:17 AM
Excellent, this is really well written, i love the feeling it gave me...it is very 'blue' visually, for me, loved it. Kristin
Jordan Avatar
September 19, 2008 at 6:13 AM
I really enjoyed this short metaphorical poem - You did a great job on this - God Bless
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