Claudia Polydoro Poet Free verse

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Your Better End

YOUR BETTER END

To be
To stare
To contemplate
To risk
To dare
Once and again
To trust
To leap
A Jump of faith
To fall
To land
No one can say
To forgive
To forget
Or try again
To breathe
To love
Feel whole and place
The fears
The doubts
To rest and then
To grow
To become
Your better end

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January 20, 2017

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Adeyemi Joshua July 25, 2017 at 3:19 PM Well Written... Well done! Claudia Polydoro September 26, 2017 at 11:27 AM Thanks Adeyemi :)

Kim Rodrigues July 25, 2017 at 9:39 AM Very nice, Claudia! Claudia Polydoro September 26, 2017 at 11:25 AM Thank you Kim :)

Michael E. Harris July 25, 2017 at 9:39 AM Fabulous. Claudia Polydoro September 26, 2017 at 11:25 AM Thanks a lot, Michael :)

White Wolf February 3, 2017 at 1:28 AM I found this in the best poems list! And such a sweet accent too! Well done, Claudia, great poem! Claudia Polydoro February 3, 2017 at 6:20 PM It is there??? wow... Thank you Budgie!!! :D

Darren White January 24, 2017 at 12:36 AM You make wonderful readings to your poems, and your accent is musical and singing, I love it, always have :) So no worries! Claudia Polydoro January 24, 2017 at 3:37 AM Thank you my sweet friend! It took me this long to have the nerve to try my hand at recording it. I'm happy you liked... (and i hate my accent - lol :P )

Joanna Daniel January 22, 2017 at 8:02 AM Very lovely piece of writing, Claudia:) I can feel the rise and fall of lines:) a 7:)by the way, love your name:) Claudia Polydoro January 22, 2017 at 8:36 AM Thank You Jo!!!! (If people disregard my accent, I will do an audio of it :P - hehehe) - And I kind of like my name too :) Hugssssss

Andrea Dietrich January 21, 2017 at 8:46 PM This is really nice, Claudia. I like the fast smooth flow of it! Great message. Claudia Polydoro January 21, 2017 at 9:39 PM Thanks a lot Andrea!! I really liked writing it :) Hugs

Frederic Parker January 20, 2017 at 7:14 PM To never fear to love again my first thought after reading your poem Claudia Polydoro January 20, 2017 at 7:36 PM To love, to take chances, to try the unknown - Yes!!! Thanks for your comment, Frederic :)

Sara Ella January 20, 2017 at 1:15 PM Love this one Claudia <3 As I said before it is the perfect list for living :) Claudia Polydoro January 20, 2017 at 6:48 PM Awww... Thanks a lot Sara! I really liked this poem too :D :)

Joseph May January 20, 2017 at 1:14 PM Well penned Claudia...best wishes Claudia Polydoro January 20, 2017 at 6:43 PM Thanks a lot Joseph! :)

Darren White January 20, 2017 at 11:04 AM Wow Claudia, I agree with Tim, one of your best and a definite 7 and fav! Claudia Polydoro January 20, 2017 at 11:24 AM :D thank you Darren! ***Doing happy dance here*** both your comments made my day <3 :*

Tim Smith January 20, 2017 at 10:26 AM This is so beautiful Claudia....one of your best...a fav Claudia Polydoro January 20, 2017 at 11:22 AM Yayyyyyy!!! Thank you Tim!!! :* <3