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Your Averted Eyes

Please look me in my eyes filled with tears What are you hiding from me, my love? You're looking down sobbing, my dear My heart is hurting like an injured dove Your shame is intensely scaring me But I am trying not to hurt And thinking we may no longer be "we" Feels like you're stomping my heart in the dirt Please tell me!! The suspense is killing my heart! You whisper the words, and I put out a whole bunch of whys What you just told me, shattered and tore me apart Now I understand your averted eyes

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Date: 8/24/2015 12:00:00 AM
Amanda, I enjoyed reading your poem. Luv ~SKAT~
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Date: 2/25/2011 1:19:00 PM
Averted to who you say in your words, described very well, your poetry is now heard. Nice piece Amanda.....:)
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Date: 2/25/2011 7:42:00 AM
Strong expressions on the dejection and disappointment from the betrayal in love, Amanda
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:46:00 AM
Wow, strong write that many plus myself can relate too... Brighter days do come, im living proof my dear Amanda...Michael
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