Your Aura (A Collaboration With Elizabeth Shannon)

The energy around you felt amazing, encompassing my very soul.
You were like a drug I was craving, and I lost all self control!
So intense was my desire, it was like a molten river flowing with need.
My loins were on fire, and the longing in my body language you could easily read.
I was burning to intertwine in your light, to swim in that pinkish hue.
I was yearning to make you mine, and ignite the sweetest passion from you!

The energy was beyond explaining...
Consuming my very being;
Like a drug if I tasted you once...
I knew without you I'd be sick...Fiening.

Mistaken with the many men syndrome.
While cupid continued missing "we."
Our connection is undeniable,
Still love is hard to see.

You've captured my attention,
and you've held all my senses hostage.
Your aura is pulling my whole essence towards you;
Mentally and physically I think you know what to do!

Note: Elizabeth wrote 2nd, 3rd, and 4th stanzas.  She is a good friend who is incarcerated at 
the womens prison in Raleigh, NC  To contact Elizabeth write to her directly: Elizabeth 
Shannon #0919740, 1034 Bragg St. Raleigh NC  27610
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Roberts Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 10:49 AM
good one both of you, much enjoyed
Mehta Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 8:48 AM
What a fine collaboration. enjoyed it, Elizabeth
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