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Your Arms Around Me

Your Arms Around Me Put your arms around me, hold me 'till I feel safe From the fears that hound me and hide their evil face. Let me feel your body, so warm while holding mine, Until I can not see the fears that steal this time. Let me feel you breathing,in symphony with me Releasing all the pain, that longs to be set free. Put your arms around me, and feel the stitching start Each beat, that's resounding, will heal this broken heart. by~Deborah Burch© 3/18/2012

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/2/2012 2:33:00 AM

'Let me feel you breathing,in symphony with me' so romantic, as love really does heal all. A very beautiful write. Congratulations on your win.

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/2/2012 2:56:00 AM

Thank you Connie...yes it does!! :) love deb

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/31/2012 1:13:00 PM

A perfect way to mend a broken heart. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Leila Mijares

Date: 3/31/2012 3:37:00 AM

Congratulations Deb....lovely poem^_^

Debra Squyres

Date: 3/30/2012 5:00:00 PM

Sometimes that holding and a love felt hug helps so much...congrats on your win !!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/30/2012 11:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your magnificent poem placing 4th in Michael's contest Deborah. Love, Carol

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 3/30/2012 10:37:00 AM

Beautiful write Deborah....congrats on your win!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/30/2012 9:27:00 AM

Congrad's on your winning write. Light & love

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/30/2012 7:52:00 AM

Congrats on your Excellent, well written, well deserved win, Deb. Enjoyed. Nice going. Have a great weekend. luv and huggs, Ralph

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/30/2012 7:34:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning piece Deborah, well done xx

Joann Grisetti

Date: 3/30/2012 7:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I love the line 'feel the stitching start'.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2012 7:12:00 AM

wow, you did awesome in the contest. Big congratulations to you, sweetie. I remember the last line of this one. So cool.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/30/2012 6:08:00 AM

Congratulations, Deb on your fantastic win in the Broken Heart contest! I love these beautiful lines. Blessings, Rhonda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/30/2012 5:58:00 AM

congrats Deborah on your sweet success in a wonderful win for an incredible write luv.. big congrats to u luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/30/2012 5:20:00 AM

Congrats on your 4th place win in my contest. You penned such a warm write with tender feelings. Thank you. Luv n hugs Michael

Jack Horne

Date: 3/19/2012 6:43:00 AM

What a beautiful piece, my friend - and there's no better way to heal from a broken heart!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/19/2012 1:12:00 AM

beautiful... Very sentimental..sweet lady- Charma

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/19/2012 1:46:00 AM

Charma!!!Thank you soooo much!! So good of you to stop by...;) Such kind encouragement does this heart good :) BTW, I love your avatar pic....sailing,racing and watching for "kitty paws"...the list goes on...have a wonderful night/day...Big Huggsss~Deb~

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/18/2012 10:09:00 PM

This is a beautiful poem based on Michael's brilliant contest "How to fix a broken heart" I love his contests as they bring out the best in you! And this one sure has brought out the best in you! I love your write that you have written here! Great Work!!

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/18/2012 10:32:00 PM

Russell you are such a dear! Thank you soooo much...I never thought I would write again...but y'all here in the 'soup' are a blessing beyond anything I could have thought of to loosen the fur-ball in my creative soul!!!!BIG HUGGSSS~Deb~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2012 8:09:00 PM

This is so sweet. A great entry for the contest, Deborah.

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/18/2012 10:27:00 PM

Thank you so much Andrea!!Big Huggsss...Have a good nite...~deb~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/18/2012 3:01:00 PM

Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the congrats on my work..Sara

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/18/2012 3:03:00 PM

Thank you Sara...and you my friend are more than welcome and well deserved....Big hugggss~Deb~

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/18/2012 2:44:00 PM

Soo sweet and romantic poem Deborah, it is a winner poem.....good luck!!! - oxox Anne-Lise

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/18/2012 3:07:00 PM

Anne Lise...my comment for you went to Marlon...LOL...this is x2 that this has happened today...:) So: Marlon...you are so clever!!! Thank you for your encouragement my friend....BIG HUG!!~Deb~ and I'm still laughing at your comment...:D