Deborah Burch Poet Couplet

Your Arms Around Me

Your Arms Around Me

Put your arms around me, hold me 'till I feel safe
From the fears that hound me and hide their evil face.

Let me feel your body, so warm while holding mine,
Until I can not see the fears that steal this time.

Let me feel you breathing,in symphony with me
Releasing all the pain, that longs to be set free.

Put your arms around me, and feel the stitching start
Each beat, that's resounding, will heal this broken heart.

by~Deborah Burch©

3/18/2012

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Connie Marcum Wong April 2, 2012 at 2:33 AM 'Let me feel you breathing,in symphony with me' so romantic, as love really does heal all. A very beautiful write. Congratulations on your win. Deborah Burch April 2, 2012 at 2:56 AM Thank you Connie...yes it does!! :) love deb

Joyce Johnson March 31, 2012 at 1:13 PM A perfect way to mend a broken heart. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Leila Mijares March 31, 2012 at 3:37 AM Congratulations Deb....lovely poem^_^

Debra Squyres March 30, 2012 at 5:00 PM Sometimes that holding and a love felt hug helps so much...congrats on your win !!

Carol Sunshine Brown March 30, 2012 at 11:46 AM Congratulations on your magnificent poem placing 4th in Michael's contest Deborah. Love, Carol

Cecilia Macfarlane March 30, 2012 at 10:37 AM Beautiful write Deborah....congrats on your win!

Debbie Guzzi March 30, 2012 at 9:27 AM Congrad's on your winning write. Light & love

Ralph Taylor March 30, 2012 at 7:52 AM Congrats on your Excellent, well written, well deserved win, Deb. Enjoyed. Nice going. Have a great weekend. luv and huggs, Ralph

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 30, 2012 at 7:34 AM Congratulations on this winning piece Deborah, well done xx

Joann Grisetti March 30, 2012 at 7:25 AM Congratulations on your win. I love the line 'feel the stitching start'.

Andrea Dietrich March 30, 2012 at 7:12 AM wow, you did awesome in the contest. Big congratulations to you, sweetie. I remember the last line of this one. So cool.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 30, 2012 at 6:08 AM Congratulations, Deb on your fantastic win in the Broken Heart contest! I love these beautiful lines. Blessings, Rhonda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 30, 2012 at 5:58 AM congrats Deborah on your sweet success in a wonderful win for an incredible write luv.. big congrats to u luv..

Michael J. Falotico March 30, 2012 at 5:20 AM Congrats on your 4th place win in my contest. You penned such a warm write with tender feelings. Thank you. Luv n hugs Michael

Jack Horne March 19, 2012 at 6:43 AM What a beautiful piece, my friend - and there's no better way to heal from a broken heart!

Charmaine Chircop March 19, 2012 at 1:12 AM beautiful... Very sentimental..sweet lady- Charma Deborah Burch March 19, 2012 at 1:46 AM Charma!!!Thank you soooo much!! So good of you to stop by...;) Such kind encouragement does this heart good :) BTW, I love your avatar pic....sailing,racing and watching for "kitty paws"...the list goes on...have a wonderful night/day...Big Huggsss~Deb~

Russell Sivey March 18, 2012 at 10:09 PM This is a beautiful poem based on Michael's brilliant contest "How to fix a broken heart" I love his contests as they bring out the best in you! And this one sure has brought out the best in you! I love your write that you have written here! Great Work!! Deborah Burch March 18, 2012 at 10:32 PM Russell you are such a dear! Thank you soooo much...I never thought I would write again...but y'all here in the 'soup' are a blessing beyond anything I could have thought of to loosen the fur-ball in my creative soul!!!!BIG HUGGSSS~Deb~

Andrea Dietrich March 18, 2012 at 8:09 PM This is so sweet. A great entry for the contest, Deborah. Deborah Burch March 18, 2012 at 10:27 PM Thank you so much Andrea!!Big Huggsss...Have a good nite...~deb~

Sara Kendrick March 18, 2012 at 3:01 PM Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the congrats on my work..Sara Deborah Burch March 18, 2012 at 3:03 PM Thank you Sara...and you my friend are more than welcome and well deserved....Big hugggss~Deb~

Anne-Lise Andresen March 18, 2012 at 2:44 PM Soo sweet and romantic poem Deborah, it is a winner poem.....good luck!!! - oxox Anne-Lise Deborah Burch March 18, 2012 at 3:07 PM Anne Lise...my comment for you went to Marlon...LOL...this is x2 that this has happened today...:) So: Marlon...you are so clever!!! Thank you for your encouragement my friend....BIG HUG!!~Deb~ and I'm still laughing at your comment...:D