Your Arms Are All Floppy

Did you ever wake up with parts still asleep You arm feels foreign and those aren't your feet They're attached they are But it feels bizarre Don't try walking, bad words you'll excrete
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Turner Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 6:10 PM
When hands and feet are numb, can't tell your toe from your thumb, just pick your nose, the smell will disclose, however you'll look really dumb:)
Ellison Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 8:34 PM
Great limerick Daniel!!! Welcome to the club!!!
Alhemaidy Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 12:21 PM
Yes :) pithy smooth poem!
Ellison Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 5:02 PM
Your kind comment is much appreciated, my friend! Thank you!!!
Flats Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 7:58 AM
Jack hit the floor with still-sleepy feet//It didn't matter, he missed not a beat//he fell on the floor//and slid out the door//but chuckled as he rolled in the street. GOOD MORNING JACKSON!!! I'm outta practice, but at least I have Inet this morning (for now). More eighty degree stuff and sunshine today!
Ellison Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 8:09 AM
Believe it or not 60 degrees here today... new records for the warmest January and February! No snow to be seen... the dandelions are all confused!!! YEE HAW! When are you heading back north!!! GOOD MORNING JOHN JOHN!!!
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February 23, 2017 at 6:52 AM
You doth provide reliable giggle: amen and seven ;)
Ellison Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 6:55 AM
LOL You doth provide reliable sweet words!!! Amen and love, Jack Sprat xxx
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