Your anonymous blog

To my face you are kindness itself:
cheerful, always upbeat,

but in your anonymous blog
you rip me apart.

You press your thumb and forefinger on each side,
hold, pull and rend,
and rupture my very innards.

You focus on me,
my life, my words, my actions and my body
like you are a Celestron Telescope
searching for every single crater and irregularity.

With an Ultima Barlow lens
and your Leica M9 18MP
You grab each natural image
and then rearrange reality with
your precious, perversely persuasive, periscopic Photoshop technique.

poetic liberty has leased you a license to assassinate,
humiliate,
decimate,
invalidate,
severely lambaste,
and mockingly castrate
everything that I identify as me.

literary freedom allows you to liberally fabricate,
mutilate,
denigrate,
incriminate,
scathingly castigate,
and maliciously urinate
on what others think of me.

To my face you are kind beyond selflessness,
but on your online beat,
your anonymous malevolence
sets you apart
from all the others
that have ever wanted
to write me up,
put me down,
and publish me out.

— Zumwalt (2011)  (used by permission from zumpoems.com)
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Andresen Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 6:26 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup :) -
Zumwalt Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 1:57 PM
Anne-Lise, Thanks!
Agustin Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 12:19 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts about a sad reality you experienced through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Zumwalt Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 1:57 PM
Beata, Thanks for reading and commenting. The poem is fictional and not based on any real incident -- just imagined by the author.
Rose  Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 2:04 PM
Sound like you didn't get a very warm welcome here, I'm so sorry for your experience, I hope you don't judge the whole fish bowl, there are a few kind people here that make up for the others, give it a chance !
Zumwalt Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 3:54 PM
Mystic Rose Rose, Thanks very much for your comment and stopping by! So far just two comments, and both nice, so all good.
Nicole Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 7:30 PM
Ouch ! That's not very nice. Those that anonymously slap words onto a platform about someone else, are cowards. Shame on them. Well said S.H. Welcome to Poetry Soup. ~ Brandy
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August 23, 2025 at 3:54 PM
Brandy, Thanks for reading and commenting! Appreciate that as well as the warm welcome!
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