Your Absinthe Eyes

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(Up-Tempo Shuffle) VERSE A Each war of personalities Within your crowded soul Reaps a gasp of mystery Anticipated - anticipated ... But just a flash of golden-green One sweetened liquored gaze I'm on a slope that's slippery Intoxicated - intoxicated - oh CHORUS 1 I drink you like a madman - ma-ad-man With cubes of sugar, sugar - sugar, sugar, Baby I'm clouded like a bad man - ba-ad-man Bittersweet those sugar highs Behind your absinthe eyes VERSE B You share your social destiny Your bitter wormwood heart Those classic drastic emojis Interrogated - interrogated ... But all you have to give to me Is that mossy smouldered look The surest way to poison me Contaminated - contaminated - oh CHORUS 2 I drink you like a madman - ma-ad-man With cubes of sugar, sugar - sugar, sugar, Baby I'm clouded like a bad man - ba-ad-man Bleeding heart for all that lies Behind your absinthe eyes BRIDGE Oh-oh, I drink you in Oh-oh, that sip of sin Oh-oh, I'm lost if I begin (Solo) CHORUS OUT I drink you like a madman - ma-ad-man With cubes of sugar, sugar - sugar, sugar, Baby I'm clouded like a bad man - ba-ad-man Angels weep as heaven cries Behind your absinthe eyes I drink you like a madman - ma-ad-man With cubes of sugar, sugar - sugar, sugar, Baby I'm clouded like a bad man - ba-ad-man Drowning in a sea of sighs Behind your absinthe eyes Behind your absinthe eyes Behind your absinthe eyes. * The music for this song has been written, and it WILL be on my upcoming album/CD - watch for updates on my web site @ www.bahku.com *

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John Hamilton

Date: 4/12/2019 5:41:00 PM

I smell a hit with this one G, too many great lines to mention...but...angels weep and heaven cries...drowning in a sea of sighs...well pure solid gold writing. Loved the choruses and bridge well ok everything.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/13/2019 1:00:00 AM

You are too kind, Buddy, thank you for your much-valued opinion ... time will tell how it does in the "real world", but it will be fun to start working on it to see how it takes form. Two songs to do before I can start on it, but excited to get there ... I'm hoping by September I can start on it. Blessings! :-)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/9/2019 2:48:00 PM

Your talent is a marvel Greg. I will check it out. Best of luck with many sales. : )

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/9/2019 5:32:00 PM

You are very kind, Connie, and I thank you so much for your comments and support! Blessings, Dear Poet! :-) <3

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/9/2019 1:09:00 PM

a bit of rock, a bit of pop... smooth lyrics, greg... a platinum hit for me!...huggs

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/9/2019 5:31:00 PM

Many kind thanks, Nette, I greatly appreciate it ... most of my music has an 80's R&B/Soul feel to it, but this one is indeed more Pop/Rock - blessings, my friend! (One of my songs, "Can't Get Enough" used to be played on DWRK Manila and Radio Indonesia, as well as BBC Radio, along with "Chill Comin' On"). :-) <3

Carole Duet

Date: 4/9/2019 12:41:00 AM

I like it! And, I listened to the "snippet" of the song on bahku. It has a great beat. *soupmail

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/9/2019 5:28:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Carole - I'm so pleased you liked some of my music! Blessings! :-) <3