Kaitlyn Ziegler Poet Free verse

Young Love and Mistakes

We started out so young and in love at 15 but then as we got older things started to go wrong when our hidden love wasn't a secret no more
we had been together for a year or more at the age of 17 we had our first born on the way but she was taken from us to soon after birth our relationship stayed intact but wasn’t the same we grew distant our young love hadn't been the same after 10 month and we were 19 the lost we had was a lot to handle but time had passed we were blessed with our beautiful boy who I thought would ease the pain
but still things didn’t change I made mistakes and you did to fill the void because things weren't rite an you weren't there the way I needed you and your mistakes were drunken an hazed a time or two so we're both to blame for our love that’s been hurt an broken now 3 years later I made small mistakes here and there  an you've still not been there the ways I’ve needed you we’re  both hard head an still young our blessed boy older and more handsome then when he was born sees the Paine our love is going through
we have our small moments of perfection the heart ache an tears are not even I don’t know what to do no more we’re about to turn 24 I miss the way things were before when you loved me the way you did when we first started out I wish I hadn't made my newish mistakes but as this new year has started I wanted a new start an it’s been greatish but as the months have passed  it’s turning bad from the past mistakes catching up with me an our new issues arising I feel our love getting more lost an possible never to be found I wish we could go back and we could prevent our mistakes from happening an our relationship be saved from this lost path but you can't turn back time just try to prove we can be trusted an take a new steps forward and hope for the best

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Poet Destroyer A July 4, 2015 at 1:57 AM Kaitlyn, I enjoyed reading this good and old verse tonight:-) Wishing you a fun safe 4th of July. ~luv~ LINDA

Jancarl Campi January 14, 2014 at 1:49 AM A few spelling and wording errors made this difficult to read, but did hurt my heart. Good luck and God bless you.

Carol Eastman September 5, 2013 at 10:40 AM A very interesting write. Sad but spell binding. Hope lingering on...

Jiril Clemons July 3, 2013 at 6:27 PM Beautiful description of young love, Kaitlyn. I enjoyed it. My name is Jiril Clemons, check out my poems, might find out you like.

Poet Tacito May 16, 2013 at 8:02 AM There are a few spelling errors and this being in full-on CAPS, made it a little bit of a challenge to read. But, it didn't steer me away. That said, the message & emotional release behind this piece is quite intense. Moreso, between the lines. Nice work! Kaitlyn Ziegler May 16, 2013 at 2:39 PM I figured out how to change the lettering an I fixed the misspellings hope that helps if you read it again srry bout that it was just a rite that second kind of poem thanks for reading my poem