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Written on January 7, 2024

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She met him when her heart was young, Fell hard and fast, but it was a feeling unsung. Time would take her down so many roads, Where life seemed so hard as darkness explodes. Breathless prayers led her to stop her mayhem, Her road turned narrow, but life wouldn’t condemn. When she met him again, so many years later, Her heart was improved by love from the Creator. Together, they shared a journey – memory’s elation, Promised to write their story of love’s amazing sensation. As time passed, for them, the story grew more perfect, Bonded by love growing wild in hearts who know respect. She met him when her heart needed a friend, And, he was certainly her feelings greatest godsend. Although I can’t tell you if and when their story might end, I know that their love story is one my words will forever defend. I’m thankful that I know this story, which was grown by my soul, It is a story built by God’s great gift, love that makes hearts whole!

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Date: 1/7/2024 4:05:00 PM
I appreciate how you've written about the bond of love growing wild in hearts who know respect...so true. I love how you've woven spirituality and God into the gift of love. Well done! enjoy the week ahead, Sara
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Date: 1/7/2024 1:11:00 AM
Oh my, this somewhat made me emotional, dear Gina.. What a profound and evocative write that explores the realm of young love, then deciphers the dialects of darkness, finally overcoming and healing, again meeting that love which once was a feeling unsung.. This truly touched my heart in so many ways.. And you've also conveyed these feelings in a spiritual way too. Your connection with God is truly a heaven-knitted one, beautiful poetess.. I can feel the purity and depths in your words.. A fav
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