Eve Roper Poet Sonnet

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Young and Reckless

Got drunk as a skunk, at a debutante
Eye catching tat I want.  With no regrets
a masterpiece of art that I can flaunt
clearly expressing my love for Begretz


Fritz  loves Begretz on a red  crimson heart.
When the artist was  done  the tattoo read
Ritz loves  Begets on a red  crimson heart
With grieve I departed , I know I’m dead

Pearl, in no way cared,   that was a big void
I’m all wrinkled wishing I was younger
Instead of  guessing  and getting  annoyed
now you know  the tattoo is no longer

Young  and reckless,   no  more needs to be said
I’m still alive with the  life that  I led

9/3/2016


Poetry Contest 
Which Of The Four Would You Choose -  cartoon #4 
  
Sponsored by: Sara Kendrick |  

Sonnet: 10 syllables per line, rhyme scheme abab, cdcd, efef, gg ..Fourteen lines with last two lines like a summary of the poem..

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Sara Kendrick September 23, 2016 at 3:08 PM Congrats on your winning work..Thanks for participating in my contest..I enjoyed reading it..Sara

Joanna Daniel September 6, 2016 at 4:13 AM Sad that it turned out wrong for Fritz..all the best for the contest:)

Beautiful Scars September 4, 2016 at 2:14 PM great one Eve, Sara will love this, good luck lovely Eve :)-luloo Eve Roper September 4, 2016 at 4:31 PM Thank you, Larua, I sure hope so Hugs Eve

Probir Gupta September 4, 2016 at 8:21 AM Nice sonnet ... Enjoyed very much ... Eve Roper September 4, 2016 at 10:07 AM Thank you so much for your support, Probir. Hugs Eve

John Fleming September 4, 2016 at 5:41 AM An interesting little read, Eve - Well executed! My warmest regards as always. :) john Eve Roper September 4, 2016 at 10:08 AM Thank you so much , John, always Hugs Eve

Connie Marcum Wong September 4, 2016 at 4:40 AM This would be horrible. Makes me think of doctors who operate on the wrong organs or limbs by mistake. I have a funny story about that...another time. I enjoyed your poem Eve. ; ) Eve Roper September 4, 2016 at 10:10 AM Thank you so much for your support, Connie, I wasn't sure what to write , but this reminded me of the commercial " Sorry! I eating a ? Milky Way." Hugs Eve