Young and Reckless

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Got drunk as a skunk, at a debutante Eye catching tat I want. With no regrets a masterpiece of art that I can flaunt clearly expressing my love for Begretz Fritz loves Begretz on a red crimson heart. When the artist was done the tattoo read Ritz loves Begets on a red crimson heart With grieve I departed , I know I’m dead Pearl, in no way cared, that was a big void I’m all wrinkled wishing I was younger Instead of guessing and getting annoyed now you know the tattoo is no longer Young and reckless, no more needs to be said I’m still alive with the life that I led 9/3/2016 Poetry Contest Which Of The Four Would You Choose - cartoon #4 Sponsored by: Sara Kendrick | Sonnet: 10 syllables per line, rhyme scheme abab, cdcd, efef, gg ..Fourteen lines with last two lines like a summary of the poem..

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/23/2016 3:08:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Thanks for participating in my contest..I enjoyed reading it..Sara

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/6/2016 4:13:00 AM

Sad that it turned out wrong for Fritz..all the best for the contest:)

Lu Loo

Date: 9/4/2016 2:14:00 PM

great one Eve, Sara will love this, good luck lovely Eve :)-luloo

Eve Roper
Date: 9/4/2016 4:31:00 PM

Thank you, Larua, I sure hope so Hugs Eve

Probir Gupta

Date: 9/4/2016 8:21:00 AM

Nice sonnet ... Enjoyed very much ...

Eve Roper
Date: 9/4/2016 10:07:00 AM

Thank you so much for your support, Probir. Hugs Eve

John Fleming

Date: 9/4/2016 5:41:00 AM

An interesting little read, Eve - Well executed! My warmest regards as always. :) john

Eve Roper
Date: 9/4/2016 10:08:00 AM

Thank you so much , John, always Hugs Eve

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/4/2016 4:40:00 AM

This would be horrible. Makes me think of doctors who operate on the wrong organs or limbs by mistake. I have a funny story about that...another time. I enjoyed your poem Eve. ; )

Eve Roper
Date: 9/4/2016 10:10:00 AM

Thank you so much for your support, Connie, I wasn't sure what to write , but this reminded me of the commercial " Sorry! I eating a ? Milky Way." Hugs Eve