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Young and Crazy N' Love

I feel so crazy in love with you i opened my heart and gave it to you. when your online i notice and when you dont call i feel hopeless. Never a stalker towards you boy but you're the only one whose ever brought the joy. back into my life but i had to think twice before i let your words control my mind. And i know this might sound crazy i thought about having your baby. our whole future lies ahead so i took that thought and now its dead. Now you talk about wedding rings though we.re only sixteen But i am older so i have to ask do you think that this will last i never thought i will cry front of a male but your words are so powerful, you broke that shell. You say you love and i do too but you dont know how much i do. our parents are on some romeo and juliet type stuff but i think we.re older enough to see what we.re doing because we maybe young blinded and dumb but we.re crazy n' love ?

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Date: 4/6/2011 2:47:00 PM
Been there and done that..My advice is to wait and get an education..It is an enjoyable poem written with passion..Sara
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Date: 12/18/2010 9:02:00 AM
Dear Malika, I enjoyed reading this, "Free Verse" and I must admit, I am a parent and being "crazy in love" can be wonderful...with respect, and caring for each other. Blessings, peace and joy, Love, audrey
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