Young

I had all these ideas of what it meat to be 24 I thought things would just fall into place and I wouldn't give it much thought. but you're still so young they said; their words not enough to take away the feelings of disgust anguish and worry. I had my own confusion masked with thoughts of grandeur and illusion. I feel like a carbon copy of who they want me to be I've lost the original me. Sorry for being aloof I think it best, sorry for being away I need to take a rest.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 6/5/2024 7:39:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.