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("Nonbinary", 2023, original encaustic) You’ll Never Come Back… Thrown into an ocean Deeper and vaster than thought Carried on waves of sound Waves of light Propelled on waves of bliss Through a portal That has no name No place No time But here and now Washed up on a shore After the storm Bathed in warmth Exhausted of all content Left alone At the heart of it all Connected to it all Without a doubt Someone whispers Somewhere Just beyond sight “You’ll never come back” And in an instant I am thrown into doubt Back to what!? To this timeless place Or what I left behind? And then in the next Caught up in those waves Propelled Life goes on Same as it ever was Forever changed Forever fresh Forever (9/27/23)

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Date: 11/18/2023 7:10:00 AM
I'm so fcin mesmerized from this one James... Idk if I would ever be able to read such a thing again... You're doing really well lots of luv!..
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James Moore
Date: 11/18/2023 7:13:00 AM
Awww. Thanks Ziva!
Date: 9/27/2023 3:43:00 PM
Thought-provoking poetry, James, thanks for giving us something to think about. Your poem was very believable to me, and I sense the meaning of the phrase, "You’ll never come back”, is based on the fact that we are always in the process of changing, so we can never come back to anything. The person we were will never be that person again, so it's not possible to ever come back to anything. Even though it is a timeless place, it will never be the same again, because again is time related. Bill
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Date: 9/27/2023 4:42:00 PM
Yes - you got it! We can never go back and we can never be the same...and in that sense we can never lose the ever fresh present moment, although it certainly feels like we do (under the weight of time)! It's reassuring to know it keeps flowing/changing. Thanks for your comments Bill - good day to you good sir!

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