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You Writhe Beneath Me

You writhe beneath me in the heat of passion Our bodies moving in rhythm The whole world seems to be exploding around us To love's sweet kingdom we're driven This passion I'm experiencing is most exquisite Like making love the very first time Your sexual talents surpass all I've yet known True abandon, a feeling so sublime We're transported to a world of ecstatic pleasures Alone, we float above our presence Oblivious to reality, to everything that surrounds us My darling, my magnificent obsession Then that moment arrives, we're frozen in time Praying the rapture would last With a brilliant flash and a feeling exquisite In unison we expel a last gasp A soft gentle moan, then collapse in exhaustion Wrapped in each other's embrace As we gently murmur sweet passionate love words While I tenderly kiss your sweet face © Jack Ellison 2015

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Date: 9/1/2015 5:23:00 AM
Excellent poem!! Love the climatic fourth stanza! This passionate poem is special! Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 9/1/2015 5:53:00 AM
As always, you make me feel so special, my sweet sweet Laura! Love, love, love, Jack xxx
Date: 8/24/2015 11:19:00 AM
Frisky is as frisky does... Lets hear the romance like Tim does...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/24/2015 11:31:00 AM
I bow to the king!!! xxx
Date: 8/24/2015 8:12:00 AM
Well good morning Jack....someone is feeling frisky this fine morn.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/24/2015 8:15:00 AM
Don't know what happened... I've been possessed!!!!

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